MoonJug: PREVIEW

MoonJug: PREVIEW · 01-31-2025, 12:33 AM

This is a preview for an upcoming movie I'm making. I hope you enjoy it.

Cabineet The Keet · 01-31-2025, 12:47 AM

Good job, you've really improved your panning. The only issues are with the bar scene really. Everything else was great. I know that's probably due to time contraints because you wanted to release this in January. I'm pretty hyped for this honestly. Good use of music too.

Lt Films · 01-31-2025, 01:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Cabineet The Keet

Good job, you've really improved your panning. The only issues are with the bar scene really. Everything else was great. I know that's probably due to time contraints because you wanted to release this in January. I'm pretty hyped for this honestly. Good use of music too.

Thank you.

Onattien · 01-31-2025, 09:26 AM

Not bad at all! I feel like camera pans are a bit too overused, and some don't pan correctly. The scenery looks like it's on the edge of the earth, so add some background scenery like trees, clouds, mountains and stuff. It's nice seeing you improve, though. Even if it took you 2 years.

Pvt Sherman · 01-31-2025, 09:33 AM

Finally something that Doesn't disappoint

kevinorsomething · 01-31-2025, 01:33 PM

I love the photograph effect. Despite the somewhat janky bar camera pan, the photograph idea is very clever and executed perfectly.

01-31-2025, 09:26 AM	#4
Onattien Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2021 Posts: 1,765	Not bad at all! I feel like camera pans are a bit too overused, and some don't pan correctly. The scenery looks like it's on the edge of the earth, so add some background scenery like trees, clouds, mountains and stuff. It's nice seeing you improve, though. Even if it took you 2 years.
Onattien Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2021 Posts: 1,765

01-31-2025, 01:33 PM	#6
kevinorsomething Member Join Date: May 2021 Posts: 920	I love the photograph effect. Despite the somewhat janky bar camera pan, the photograph idea is very clever and executed perfectly.
kevinorsomething Member Join Date: May 2021 Posts: 920

01-31-2025, 12:47 AM	#2
Cabineet The Keet Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2022 Posts: 1,850	Good job, you've really improved your panning. The only issues are with the bar scene really. Everything else was great. I know that's probably due to time contraints because you wanted to release this in January. I'm pretty hyped for this honestly. Good use of music too.

01-31-2025, 09:33 AM	#5
Pvt Sherman Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2021 Posts: 1,591	Finally something that Doesn't disappoint