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Old 01-17-2022, 08:41 AM
Destiny (Trailer)
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19 year old man investigates a place in the middle of nowhere.


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Old 01-17-2022, 09:53 AM   #2
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There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!
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Old 01-17-2022, 09:56 AM   #3
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Alright,this looks cool! I want to see more PLEASE


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Old 01-17-2022, 10:20 AM   #4
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There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!
Thanks for that, Bown. Anyways, I will fix the problems in the movie.
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Old 01-17-2022, 12:24 PM   #5
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For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!


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Old 01-17-2022, 12:33 PM   #6
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Yeah, agree with Bown and Plop's comments. Some potential here, looking forward to your movie!


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Old 01-17-2022, 01:14 PM   #7
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For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!
Thanks! I agree with your suggestions.
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Old 01-17-2022, 02:38 PM   #8
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This looks promising I like it and I agree with Bown and Plop's comments. I recommend the 3d word fonts if you're not already they're really useful especially the Landscape Font's. Font Letter Maps


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Old 01-17-2022, 05:49 PM   #9
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Oh yeah. Landscape font, I forgot to add that in the movie |:
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Old 01-27-2022, 10:51 PM   #10
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How’s progress?


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Old 01-28-2022, 08:39 AM   #11
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nothing much.

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meh, i made like 5 more scenes, and was working on it now,
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Old 01-28-2022, 09:07 AM   #12
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Nice!
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