Destiny (Trailer)

[Bown]

There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!

[Onattienz]

Alright,this looks cool! I want to see more PLEASE

[ArtiColl]

Originally Posted by Bown

There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!

Thanks for that, Bown. Anyways, I will fix the problems in the movie.

[Plopilpy]

For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!

[Kane]

Yeah, agree with Bown and Plop's comments. Some potential here, looking forward to your movie!

[ArtiColl]

Originally Posted by Plopilpy

For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!

Thanks! I agree with your suggestions.

[PizzaLuigi]

This looks promising I like it and I agree with Bown and Plop's comments. I recommend the 3d word fonts if you're not already they're really useful especially the Landscape Font's. Font Letter Maps

[ArtiColl]

Oh yeah. Landscape font, I forgot to add that in the movie |:

[PizzaLuigi]

How’s progress?

[ArtiColl]

Originally Posted by PizzaLuigi

How’s progress?

meh, i made like 5 more scenes, and was working on it now,

[Bown]

Nice!