Destiny (Trailer)

Bown · 01-17-2022, 09:53 AM

There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!

ArtiColl · 01-17-2022, 10:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Bown

There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!

Thanks for that, Bown. Anyways, I will fix the problems in the movie.

Onattienz · 01-17-2022, 09:56 AM

Alright,this looks cool! I want to see more PLEASE

Plopilpy · 01-17-2022, 12:24 PM

For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!

ArtiColl · 01-17-2022, 01:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Plopilpy

For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background.

Looks good though!

Thanks! I agree with your suggestions.

Kane · 01-17-2022, 12:33 PM

Yeah, agree with Bown and Plop's comments. Some potential here, looking forward to your movie!

PizzaLuigi · 01-17-2022, 02:38 PM

This looks promising I like it and I agree with Bown and Plop's comments. I recommend the 3d word fonts if you're not already they're really useful especially the Landscape Font's. Font Letter Maps

ArtiColl · 01-17-2022, 05:49 PM

Oh yeah. Landscape font, I forgot to add that in the movie |:

PizzaLuigi · 01-27-2022, 10:51 PM

How’s progress?

ArtiColl · 01-28-2022, 08:39 AM

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Originally Posted by PizzaLuigi

How’s progress?

meh, i made like 5 more scenes, and was working on it now,

Bown · 01-28-2022, 09:07 AM

Nice!

01-17-2022, 09:53 AM	#2
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740	There's some promise here, but also a long way to go. The main issue here is lack of detail in the background - every scene looks like it takes place on the edge of the world. Also the cop in the thumbnailed scene looks tiny - he's dwarfed by that car next to him - and there's an over-reliance on fades, although I get that that may be because this is a trailer. Still, there's some decent scenery, and it's nice to see a new member making something with an original story. I will watch the full movie when you post it!
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740

01-17-2022, 09:56 AM	#4
Onattienz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2021 Posts: 277	Alright,this looks cool! I want to see more PLEASE
Onattienz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2021 Posts: 277

01-17-2022, 12:24 PM	#5
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097	For a beginner, wow. That's actually very good for someone making their first post here. Do add some detail, as Bown added, but also add some subtle things like the car shaking slightly as the person drives or some small bushes and trees in the dirt background. Looks good though!
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097

01-17-2022, 12:33 PM	#7
Kane Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,096	Yeah, agree with Bown and Plop's comments. Some potential here, looking forward to your movie!
Kane Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,096

01-17-2022, 05:49 PM	#9
ArtiColl Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2022 Posts: 46	Oh yeah. Landscape font, I forgot to add that in the movie \|:
ArtiColl Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2022 Posts: 46

01-17-2022, 02:38 PM	#8
PizzaLuigi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 1,144	This looks promising I like it and I agree with Bown and Plop's comments. I recommend the 3d word fonts if you're not already they're really useful especially the Landscape Font's. Font Letter Maps

01-27-2022, 10:51 PM	#10
PizzaLuigi Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 1,144	How’s progress?

01-28-2022, 09:07 AM	#12
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740	Nice!
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740