Joe Does 9/11

Joe Does 9/11 · 04:20 AM

The first film I've made in Movie Maker.
https://youtu.be/28i3O8ax9g4

Plopilpy · 11-30-2020, 05:07 PM

please don't post your first films.

PDFMan · 11-30-2020, 06:03 PM

I don't see what the issue is

Hermes · 11-30-2020, 06:04 PM

Here's my feedback: Don't listen to the program's tutorial, it will be less generic.

Plopilpy · 11-30-2020, 06:13 PM

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Originally Posted by PDFMan

I don't see what the issue is

Take this quote from Old Rivers as advice.

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Originally Posted by Old Rivers

Because when you post a movie to 3dmm.com, the presumption is that you are doing so because members of the 3dmm community will find it impressive and/or entertaining. This is nothing other than trash. You might actually be able to literally teach an ape to make a better movie than this. And it matters that he posted it here because many other people have been posting similar (but not quite thislevel of bad) trash recently. This is bad because it clogs the release section up, and subsequently makes it more difficult for people to notice decent movies that actually have impressive qualities.

PDFMan · 11-30-2020, 06:18 PM

Ok, cool. I was feeling confident enough of the quality of what I had made, despite the lackluster second act. If there's anything I can improve on, let me know.

Dustin Guest · 11-30-2020, 10:34 PM

It’s not the worst thing I’ve ever seen on here. At least you have a story going on here and it’s not literally just an actor dancing. That said, it’s not good. It feels like you’re trying way too hard to be edgy. Still, I think you could become better and eventually make some good shit. Keep trying and improving

11-30-2020, 05:07 PM	#2
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097	please don't post your first films.
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097

11-30-2020, 06:03 PM	#3
PDFMan Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2020 Posts: 5	I don't see what the issue is
PDFMan Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2020 Posts: 5

11-30-2020, 06:04 PM	#4
Hermes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2020 Posts: 257	Here's my feedback: Don't listen to the program's tutorial, it will be less generic.
Hermes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2020 Posts: 257

11-30-2020, 06:18 PM	#6
PDFMan Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2020 Posts: 5	Ok, cool. I was feeling confident enough of the quality of what I had made, despite the lackluster second act. If there's anything I can improve on, let me know.
PDFMan Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2020 Posts: 5

11-30-2020, 10:34 PM	#7
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	It’s not the worst thing I’ve ever seen on here. At least you have a story going on here and it’s not literally just an actor dancing. That said, it’s not good. It feels like you’re trying way too hard to be edgy. Still, I think you could become better and eventually make some good shit. Keep trying and improving