The Ends of the Earth

Hermes · 10-31-2020, 12:02 AM

It didn't feel like it took a year to make.

Old Rivers · 10-31-2020, 12:40 AM

Haha yeah seriously. Ignoring that, this wasn't terrible. I thought the narration and the music worked well together. The animation on the other hand was... not great.

Overall pretty bad, but with a few indicators of originality.

Plopilpy · 10-31-2020, 01:07 AM

Yep. Agreed.

Dustin Guest · 10-31-2020, 02:21 AM

Ooof...that was rough. I appreciate the effort you put in, but the execution of it all is just...dull. I wasn't entirely sure on the tone you were going for. The narration felt a little serious but the music and character choice was just...goofy. I don't know if this was your first effort, but I hope you stick with it and improve.

Old Rivers · 10-31-2020, 02:30 AM

This felt like 'Pamela' if Haynes had made it when he was 8.

Wolverine Potter · 11-22-2020, 02:54 PM

Yeah. Looking back at this. It is pretty bad

10-31-2020, 12:02 AM	#2
Hermes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2020 Posts: 257	It didn't feel like it took a year to make.
Hermes Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2020 Posts: 257

10-31-2020, 01:07 AM	#4
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097	Yep. Agreed.
Plopilpy Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 3,097

10-31-2020, 12:40 AM	#3
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Haha yeah seriously. Ignoring that, this wasn't terrible. I thought the narration and the music worked well together. The animation on the other hand was... not great. Overall pretty bad, but with a few indicators of originality.

10-31-2020, 02:21 AM	#5
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Ooof...that was rough. I appreciate the effort you put in, but the execution of it all is just...dull. I wasn't entirely sure on the tone you were going for. The narration felt a little serious but the music and character choice was just...goofy. I don't know if this was your first effort, but I hope you stick with it and improve.

10-31-2020, 02:30 AM	#6
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	This felt like 'Pamela' if Haynes had made it when he was 8.

11-22-2020, 02:54 PM	#7
Wolverine Potter Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 63	Yeah. Looking back at this. It is pretty bad