Too Deep

Too Deep · 03-23-2020, 02:29 AM

An unnamed explorer who ventures into a deep cave falls into a strange labyrinth where he meets a secret society! Now he must escape from the clutches of goat man!

I am open to any and all criticism.

https://youtu.be/DPc2nz7Rtd4

Nintendoman · 06:57 PM

Edit: If you get the error: "Hey! I can't find this CD! N3DMM Expansion," just add Nickelodeon 3DMM to the active mods. I forgot to save the movie when I had the expansion deactived, so... Sorry about that!

Old Rivers · 03-23-2020, 03:03 AM

You really chose an action-packed screenshot for this one.

Nintendoman · 03-23-2020, 06:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Old Rivers

You really chose an action-packed screenshot for this one.

Thanks, I know

Jt Copper · 12:20 AM

I actually had fun watching this! For a debut movie on the board, this isn't bad at all. The animation in some parts is pretty crisp, especially the goat-man's cape, and some of the pan shots are not bad either. I liked the opening shot with the plantdings, and the music was fitting too, as it was for most parts, and the music for goat-man killed me, I loved it.

The movie slows down a bit when the creatures are first introduced. I really did not understand what was happening, and the lack of description left me confused (I only just discovered the plot by reading the description of the movie in this thread). The MIDI track did not help with enjoying the scene either. the scene where the explorer was burning at the stake fell flat too, as it was painfully noticeable that you stopped animating the fire partway through, and the scenery was bland too. This scene could have had an extra hour of work added to it.

Nothing else I really have to say that I didn't already say from the other thread. Keep improving on the scenes, and keep up with the effort, because it pays off here. Good work!

Nintendoman · 03-27-2020, 08:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Jt Copper

The movie slows down a bit when the creatures are first introduced. I really did not understand what was happening, and the lack of description left me confused (I only just discovered the plot by reading the description of the movie in this thread). The MIDI track did not help with enjoying the scene either. the scene where the explorer was burning at the stake fell flat too, as it was painfully noticeable that you stopped animating the fire partway through, and the scenery was bland too. This scene could have had an extra hour added to it.

Yeah I gave up on the fire once I realized it was too much work. I got lazy during the scene, and it was late and I wanted to get off. It was never really a good scene imo, even as I was making it. I'm glad I added the goat man battle scene afterwards, as I originally had it so where the burning at the stake scene would be the end.

Old Rivers · 03-28-2020, 12:15 PM

This wasn't too bad for a first movie. Way more watchable than a lot the crap that new people release these days. The burning at the stake scene looked decent.

Keep it up!

Nintendoman · 03-28-2020, 05:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Old Rivers

This wasn't too bad for a first movie. Way more watchable than a lot the crap that new people release these days. The burning at the stake scene looked decent.

Keep it up!

Oh no, I've made loads of other movies on my YouTube channel.

Most of them aren't that good.

Old Rivers · 03-28-2020, 12:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Jt Copper

This scene could have had an extra hour added to it

...what??

Jt Copper · 04-03-2020, 12:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Old Rivers

...what??

I meant an extra hour of working on the scene. Sorry about that.

Old Rivers · 04-03-2020, 04:42 AM

Ah. Apology accepted.

03-23-2020, 02:56 AM	#2
Nintendoman Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 62	Edit: If you get the error: "Hey! I can't find this CD! N3DMM Expansion," just add Nickelodeon 3DMM to the active mods. I forgot to save the movie when I had the expansion deactived, so... Sorry about that!
Nintendoman Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 62	Last edited by Nintendoman : 03-23-2020 at 06:57 PM.

03-27-2020, 10:28 AM	#5
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	I actually had fun watching this! For a debut movie on the board, this isn't bad at all. The animation in some parts is pretty crisp, especially the goat-man's cape, and some of the pan shots are not bad either. I liked the opening shot with the plantdings, and the music was fitting too, as it was for most parts, and the music for goat-man killed me, I loved it. The movie slows down a bit when the creatures are first introduced. I really did not understand what was happening, and the lack of description left me confused (I only just discovered the plot by reading the description of the movie in this thread). The MIDI track did not help with enjoying the scene either. the scene where the explorer was burning at the stake fell flat too, as it was painfully noticeable that you stopped animating the fire partway through, and the scenery was bland too. This scene could have had an extra hour of work added to it. Nothing else I really have to say that I didn't already say from the other thread. Keep improving on the scenes, and keep up with the effort, because it pays off here. Good work!
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Last edited by Jt Copper : 04-03-2020 at 12:20 AM. Reason: fixed vague sentence

03-23-2020, 03:03 AM	#3
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	You really chose an action-packed screenshot for this one.

03-28-2020, 12:15 PM	#7
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	This wasn't too bad for a first movie. Way more watchable than a lot the crap that new people release these days. The burning at the stake scene looked decent. Keep it up!

04-03-2020, 04:42 AM	#11
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Ah. Apology accepted.