Some comics made with Arthur Comic Creator

Harryboogle · 07-14-2019, 04:09 PM

I discovered Arthur Comic Creator a while ago and now I've decided to have a go. Happy reading!

By the way, let me know what you think of them. I can take a bit of constructive criticism, but not anything that isn't.

Dave Miles · 07-14-2019, 05:57 PM

could use more actual jokes and not just “shock value” type punchlines.

Harryboogle · 07-14-2019, 07:43 PM

Okay I'll try my best tomorrow.

OmniromX · 07-14-2019, 07:56 PM

I agree with Dave Miles. The second one made me chuckle a little. These are very unoriginal. Basically what you'd expect to see from your average 4chan post. Other critiques:

-Buster Baxter doesn't have a little brother.
-Mr. Ratburn wouldn't offer Arthur candy in the mall

Dave Miles · 07-14-2019, 08:19 PM

Also making sex jokes with characters depicted as children, you can do better than that. A good joke doesn’t need the crutch of shock value to be funny.

HamburgerWhale · 07-14-2019, 08:28 PM

Woah i didn't even know it was still around?

Phil Williamson · 07-17-2019, 10:34 PM

haha we're all such lame GROWN-UPS now. but it's true. these basically felt like naughty versions of Roger Ebert's New Yorker caption submissions

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Originally Posted by OmniromX

-Buster Baxter doesn't have a little brother.

well, not anymore he doesn't

Jacob Adams · 09-14-2019, 07:39 AM

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Originally Posted by Phil Williamson

well, not anymore he doesn't

hahaahaha

Slime · 10-13-2019, 09:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Phil Williamson

haha we're all such lame GROWN-UPS now. but it's true. these basically felt like naughty versions of Roger Ebert's New Yorker caption submissions

this is dumb... its just fake news for the sake of it?
i guess i found it slightly funny imagining ebert writing the "So much for Obamacare" caption but MEH

Dungeon Snake · 09-15-2019, 02:21 AM

I thought the last one was funny. Honestly these aren't bad, it's the kind of stuff my brothers and me would have made if we had access to this kind of technology. Instead we made RPG Maker games and 3dmm movies where people shit rats out and stuff. Anhyway, 3/6 stars

Dungeon Snake · 10-14-2019, 03:26 AM

i just looked at this thread again and that last comic really did make me lol. I give that one 5/6 stars

Old Rivers · 10-14-2019, 05:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Dungeon Snake

i just looked at this thread again and that last comic really did make me lol. I give that one 5/6 stars

I dunno I think the complete irrelevance of the (identical) panels drags it down.

Slime · 10-14-2019, 04:54 AM

#2 made me smile even if its standard

07-14-2019, 04:09 PM	#1
Harryboogle Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 8	Some comics made with Arthur Comic Creator I discovered Arthur Comic Creator a while ago and now I've decided to have a go. Happy reading! By the way, let me know what you think of them. I can take a bit of constructive criticism, but not anything that isn't.
Harryboogle Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 8	"Buy children's shoes now, you slut, because you can't be trusted to do anything." -- The Bible (Rosenicus 24:9)

07-14-2019, 07:43 PM	#3
Harryboogle Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 8	Okay I'll try my best tomorrow.
Harryboogle Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 8	"Buy children's shoes now, you slut, because you can't be trusted to do anything." -- The Bible (Rosenicus 24:9)

07-14-2019, 07:56 PM	#4
OmniromX Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 824	I agree with Dave Miles. The second one made me chuckle a little. These are very unoriginal. Basically what you'd expect to see from your average 4chan post. Other critiques: -Buster Baxter doesn't have a little brother. -Mr. Ratburn wouldn't offer Arthur candy in the mall
OmniromX Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 824

10-14-2019, 04:54 AM	#13
Slime Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 24,891	#2 made me smile even if its standard
Slime Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 24,891

07-14-2019, 05:57 PM	#2
Dave Miles Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 10,236	could use more actual jokes and not just “shock value” type punchlines.

07-14-2019, 08:19 PM	#5
Dave Miles Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 10,236	Also making sex jokes with characters depicted as children, you can do better than that. A good joke doesn’t need the crutch of shock value to be funny.

07-14-2019, 08:28 PM	#6
HamburgerWhale Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 62	Woah i didn't even know it was still around?

09-15-2019, 02:21 AM	#10
Dungeon Snake Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 17,519	I thought the last one was funny. Honestly these aren't bad, it's the kind of stuff my brothers and me would have made if we had access to this kind of technology. Instead we made RPG Maker games and 3dmm movies where people shit rats out and stuff. Anhyway, 3/6 stars

10-14-2019, 03:26 AM	#11
Dungeon Snake Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 17,519	i just looked at this thread again and that last comic really did make me lol. I give that one 5/6 stars