GTA V: Jurassic World stufffff

Red Scorpion · 06-28-2015, 10:23 PM

Yeah.

Tuna Hematoma · 06-29-2015, 05:29 AM

very swish! :-3

Red Scorpion · 06-29-2015, 11:47 AM

Thanks man!

Scatterbrain · 06-29-2015, 01:36 PM

god, I hope I'm not too late to reply! Good job that was pretty well put together, the huge dinosaur slowly crossing the car park made me laugh.

Red Scorpion · 06-29-2015, 01:41 PM

Haha shut up, wanker

Thanks man, yeaaah, having rendered it and watched that scene, as well as the T-Rex eating the doctor and the raptor chase scene.. They do look a little sloppy, it was a learning experience though, so I'll hopefully improve with the next video I make.

Evil Ash · 06-29-2015, 06:09 PM

I'd recommend tightening it up. The last 45 seconds or so are pretty much just the same thing over and over and it becomes a bit dull.

Trailers tend to have a nice quick arch to them, and the pace is edited to increase excitement as it builds, peaking near the end. The length of the end kind of kills that excitement and by the time it ends you're just like "Yeah that's cool..."

As far as editing goes, anyways.

Red Scorpion · 06-29-2015, 06:57 PM

Thanks man, I'll keep that in mind for next time (if I make another trailer), will probably be good for different machinimas and stuff too!

06-28-2015, 10:23 PM	#1
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229	GTA V: Jurassic World stufffff Yeah.
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06-29-2015, 11:47 AM	#3
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229	Thanks man!
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06-29-2015, 01:41 PM	#5
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229	Haha shut up, wanker Thanks man, yeaaah, having rendered it and watched that scene, as well as the T-Rex eating the doctor and the raptor chase scene.. They do look a little sloppy, it was a learning experience though, so I'll hopefully improve with the next video I make.
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229

06-29-2015, 06:09 PM	#6
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	I'd recommend tightening it up. The last 45 seconds or so are pretty much just the same thing over and over and it becomes a bit dull. Trailers tend to have a nice quick arch to them, and the pace is edited to increase excitement as it builds, peaking near the end. The length of the end kind of kills that excitement and by the time it ends you're just like "Yeah that's cool..." As far as editing goes, anyways.
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

06-29-2015, 06:57 PM	#7
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229	Thanks man, I'll keep that in mind for next time (if I make another trailer), will probably be good for different machinimas and stuff too!
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229

06-29-2015, 05:29 AM	#2
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	very swish! :-3

06-29-2015, 01:36 PM	#4
Scatterbrain Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 8,564	god, I hope I'm not too late to reply! Good job that was pretty well put together, the huge dinosaur slowly crossing the car park made me laugh.