Officer Of The Law

Officer Of The Law · 06:31 PM

because why not?
after countless amounts of fruit drinks and youtube videos and instant noodles, i made it!.
spent like 2 months, mostly because i had no motivation or the energy to do it,
and also soundtracks from paper mario, mostly.
also, someone translate polla in google tras.
lolimsocreative

Dustin Guest · 03-19-2014, 01:42 PM

Ok, that fight was cool as hell.

Ben Rice · 03-19-2014, 04:40 PM

nice work man, your animation is most promising! only suggestion i'd give is to work on your scenery, try and spread the buildings out a bit, some of the scenery backgrounds were so stretched out, rushed, used for filler etc that i felt it ruined my enjoyment of some of your animating. i dig your style man but you still need to work on it a bit, maybe add some voices or something to your next movie, gimme a shout if you ever want a voice actor!

other than that though you're doing a great job, looking forward to seeing what you have next up your sleeve.

Theflyingcar · 03-19-2014, 04:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ben Rice

nice work man, your animation is most promising! only suggestion i'd give is to work on your scenery, try and spread the buildings out a bit, some of the scenery backgrounds were so stretched out, rushed, used for filler etc that i felt it ruined my enjoyment of some of your animating. i dig your style man but you still need to work on it a bit, maybe add some voices or something to your next movie, gimme a shout if you ever want a voice actor!

other than that though you're doing a great job, looking forward to seeing what you have next up your sleeve.

oh ok.
-work on scenery
-voices (which is what i am not going to do)
alright, thanks.

Cubert · 03-19-2014, 06:16 PM

Hahah better every time, I love this. Agreed on both points so far- the scenery could do with a little more polish, and the fight was brilliant. Please keep making movies these are really fun.

Skittlebrau · 03-19-2014, 07:15 PM

Really good, well done.

Broken Pencil · 03-19-2014, 09:41 PM

Haha, This was amazing I absolutely love your fast paced animation (which is jittery at times), along with the use of models! Keep it up!

French Fry · 03-19-2014, 10:06 PM

*Hits his leg, blood comes out of his head*

A little confused about that logic there, but nonetheless, I loved it.

Theflyingcar · 03-19-2014, 11:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bonk Boy!

*Hits his leg, blood comes out of his head*

A little confused about that logic there, but nonetheless, I loved it.

he bled inside, so blood came out of his mouth.

Dustin Guest · 03-20-2014, 12:52 AM

Also, he hit him in the head. It works. Sorta.

OmniromX · 03-21-2014, 02:26 AM

I liked it a lot. I like your style. However, it does feel like you rushed the movie as it progressed.

Broken Pencil · 03-28-2014, 12:38 AM

Wre did that ahahaaaa sound come from?!?!

Theflyingcar · 03-28-2014, 09:31 PM

webl's stuff : AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAA!
thats the title.

03-19-2014, 04:40 PM	#3
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	nice work man, your animation is most promising! only suggestion i'd give is to work on your scenery, try and spread the buildings out a bit, some of the scenery backgrounds were so stretched out, rushed, used for filler etc that i felt it ruined my enjoyment of some of your animating. i dig your style man but you still need to work on it a bit, maybe add some voices or something to your next movie, gimme a shout if you ever want a voice actor! other than that though you're doing a great job, looking forward to seeing what you have next up your sleeve.
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

03-19-2014, 06:16 PM	#5
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990	Hahah better every time, I love this. Agreed on both points so far- the scenery could do with a little more polish, and the fight was brilliant. Please keep making movies these are really fun.
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990

03-21-2014, 02:26 AM	#11
OmniromX Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 824	I liked it a lot. I like your style. However, it does feel like you rushed the movie as it progressed.
OmniromX Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 824

03-19-2014, 01:42 PM	#2
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Ok, that fight was cool as hell.

03-19-2014, 07:15 PM	#6
Skittlebrau Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 8,804	Really good, well done.

03-19-2014, 09:41 PM	#7
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	Haha, This was amazing I absolutely love your fast paced animation (which is jittery at times), along with the use of models! Keep it up!

03-19-2014, 10:06 PM	#8
French Fry Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 1,962	Hits his leg, blood comes out of his head A little confused about that logic there, but nonetheless, I loved it.

03-20-2014, 12:52 AM	#10
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Also, he hit him in the head. It works. Sorta.

03-28-2014, 12:38 AM	#12
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	Wre did that ahahaaaa sound come from?!?!

03-28-2014, 09:31 PM	#13
Theflyingcar Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 254	webl's stuff : AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAA! thats the title.