Randolphs Day out

Randolphs Day out · 06:50 AM

*I couldn't youtube it because camtasia won't record the sound, only the midi*

Old Rivers · 01-11-2014, 06:33 PM

gotta get that totem pole alcohol.

Theflyingcar · 08:15 PM

hmm this place is spooky.
btw, i didn't understand what happend, randolph breakdanced in front of augustin, then got the "totem alcohol" then died,
what is this i dont even.

Broken Pencil · 01-11-2014, 08:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Theflyingcar

hmm this place is spooky.
btw, i didn't understand what happend, randolph breakdanced in front of augustin, then got the "totem alcohol" then died,
what is this i dont even.

When he breakdanced in front of Augustin, augustin was so impressed, that he gave him a free meal (it came in zack's dismembered head from Brock Obama vs. Zack. Then, he got drunk and crashed into an old man's cottage. Now do you get it?

Broken Pencil · 08:43 PM

ahaha, what? %15 is a bit low, but ok.
alright, %20 percent. NOW where getting somewhere!

Jt Copper · 01-12-2014, 01:10 AM

I rated 70% only because compared to your other work, this was really good. Though I feel that you are trying to mimic my comedic form of style. It kinda has all the blocking points of an average Marcy episode.

Jt Copper · 01-12-2014, 01:10 AM

Also, finish Operation Vortex part two you twit.

Broken Pencil · 01-12-2014, 02:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jt Copper

I rated 70% only because compared to your other work, this was really good. Though I feel that you are trying to mimic my comedic form of style. It kinda has all the blocking points of an average Marcy episode.

I was actually trying to go on a scale of "random" and small plot (as if it were a small short)

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jt Copper

Also, finish Operation Vortex part two you twit.

hahaha, now I'm thinking of doing a remake (the first was pretty sucky in my oppinion because of how slowly pasted it was) with both parts. But I'll need voice actors, *cough cough Jt Copper cough cough*.

Jt Copper · 01-12-2014, 02:33 AM

Yeah yeah, my 7Gen is still busted so I got free time on my hands. Just let me know when you get there.

Compcat · 01-12-2014, 03:21 AM

Not too bad. It's obvious this was just the result of messing around and trying different stuff, but nothing wrong with that. You'll get better responses when you've put some more effort into a cohesive story and some more original style, but this is good practice in getting to that point.

Good use of scene props. They're efficient, easy to animate, and aren't cloyingly familiar like default scenes. That said, you should try making some detailed handmade scenery, as it's somewhat necessary to making a great movie.

I'm going to have to agree with Copper that the style is similar to his (I actually wondered whether Copper was helping make it). I don't think that's a problem though; you got to start by emulating someone. But Pencil, I think you should try to get into some of the older 3dmm movies in the archive. I think you'll find a lot of them quite entertaining, and just by developing your interest in other 3dmm films you'll start to develop your own voice within the medium. You're on a good track right now though.

Jt Copper · 04:16 AM

^Fucking this^

And yeah man, try molding your on style around older and far more advanced 3dmmer's next time. I appreciate you look up to me and find me as an A-list 3DMMer, but no. I am still far from that status, I am not a veteran...

Not yet.

Theflyingcar · 01-12-2014, 11:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Broken Pencil

When he breakdanced in front of Augustin, augustin was so impressed, that he gave him a free meal (it came in zack's dismembered head from Brock Obama vs. Zack. Then, he got drunk and crashed into an old man's cottage. Now do you get it?

its hard to keep up with all those flashes and stuff though, try to put some effort in your movies

other than flashing the scenes and jumpcutting, but i cant give that advice, since no one knows me and i joined the site a year ago.

Theflyingcar · 11:57 AM

you saw nothing!

Broken Pencil · 01-12-2014, 03:03 PM

I rated it 50

And also double post

Theflyingcar · 01-12-2014, 05:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Broken Pencil

I rated it 50

And also double post

OH SHOOT!

Dustin Guest · 01-13-2014, 04:38 AM

Well...your animation has improved anyway...

Broken Pencil · 01-13-2014, 04:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Theflyingcar

OH SHOOT!

hahahaha, nice edit.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dustin Guest

Well...your animation has improved anyway...

Yeah, I should just focus on more story rather then animation

Dustin Guest · 01-13-2014, 06:21 PM

I look forward to the day when your sense of humor develops beyond "lol random". You ARE improving, though. I'm not saying you need to produce fucking Shakespeare, but a beginning, middle, and end would be nice. Rather than "show up, dance, give guy a severed head, car crash, end." Definitely check out some older 3d movies. There are lots of good comedic shorts than can help you learn how to put together a comedic movie and maybe find your own voice. Also...you really need to stop concerning yourself with percentages and focus more on the criticisms. You're not to a point where percentages should matter. And complaining about someone not rating your movie as highly as you think it should be rated is just...tacky. Don't be that guy.

Jt Copper · 01-13-2014, 10:10 PM

I strongly recommend Michael Sandford. Young, full of talent, definatly someone your age should look on. After nine years, and his movies still hasn't aged. Honestly some of your work aged after the first day.

Not saying my work ages though. Mine aged like fucking milk.

Ben Rice · 01-14-2014, 04:29 AM

it hasn't been nine years

Broken Pencil · 01-14-2014, 11:28 AM

I watched Bongo by Michael Sandford, and the ending was hilarious! and the animation was really cool. Damn, Michael got-some good gun models goin' on in dat' movie! the music also fit very well with the whole "kill some people, get some (more) weapons, get the money, goto the doctor, penis enlargement (by a billion)"

Wait a minute... I think I know what people want me to do!

MAKE MY MOVIES lONGAR!

Tuna Hematoma · 01-14-2014, 06:19 PM

I read that as iongar and got confused.

Dustin Guest · 01-14-2014, 06:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Broken Pencil

Wait a minute... I think I know what people want me to do!

MAKE MY MOVIES lONGAR!

Or...y'know...make them BETTER and more coherent.

Jt Copper · 01-14-2014, 07:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ben Rice

it hasn't been nine years

*8 years

I was counting this year but yeah, his first posted movie was in 06, I was one year off. Sue me.

Nixon · 01-14-2014, 08:05 PM

check out some of omniromns stuff, that might inspire you in terms of HMC's and camera movement!

just kidding, do not do that

01-11-2014, 06:41 PM	#3
Theflyingcar Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 254	hmm this place is spooky. btw, i didn't understand what happend, randolph breakdanced in front of augustin, then got the "totem alcohol" then died, what is this i dont even.
	Last edited by Theflyingcar : 01-11-2014 at 08:15 PM.

01-11-2014, 08:20 PM	#5
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	ahaha, what? %15 is a bit low, but ok. alright, %20 percent. NOW where getting somewhere!
	Last edited by Broken Pencil : 01-11-2014 at 08:43 PM.

01-12-2014, 01:10 AM	#6
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	I rated 70% only because compared to your other work, this was really good. Though I feel that you are trying to mimic my comedic form of style. It kinda has all the blocking points of an average Marcy episode.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

01-12-2014, 01:10 AM	#7
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Also, finish Operation Vortex part two you twit.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

01-12-2014, 02:33 AM	#9
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Yeah yeah, my 7Gen is still busted so I got free time on my hands. Just let me know when you get there.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

01-11-2014, 06:33 PM	#2
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	gotta get that totem pole alcohol.

01-12-2014, 03:21 AM	#10
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Not too bad. It's obvious this was just the result of messing around and trying different stuff, but nothing wrong with that. You'll get better responses when you've put some more effort into a cohesive story and some more original style, but this is good practice in getting to that point. Good use of scene props. They're efficient, easy to animate, and aren't cloyingly familiar like default scenes. That said, you should try making some detailed handmade scenery, as it's somewhat necessary to making a great movie. I'm going to have to agree with Copper that the style is similar to his (I actually wondered whether Copper was helping make it). I don't think that's a problem though; you got to start by emulating someone. But Pencil, I think you should try to get into some of the older 3dmm movies in the archive. I think you'll find a lot of them quite entertaining, and just by developing your interest in other 3dmm films you'll start to develop your own voice within the medium. You're on a good track right now though.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

01-12-2014, 04:15 AM	#11
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	^Fucking this^ And yeah man, try molding your on style around older and far more advanced 3dmmer's next time. I appreciate you look up to me and find me as an A-list 3DMMer, but no. I am still far from that status, I am not a veteran... Not yet.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Last edited by Jt Copper : 01-12-2014 at 04:16 AM. Reason: This joke smells like dirty cat litter.

01-12-2014, 11:23 AM	#13
Theflyingcar Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 254	you saw nothing!
	Last edited by Theflyingcar : 01-15-2014 at 11:57 AM.

01-12-2014, 03:03 PM	#14
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	I rated it 50 And also double post

01-13-2014, 04:38 AM	#16
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Well...your animation has improved anyway...

01-13-2014, 06:21 PM	#18
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	I look forward to the day when your sense of humor develops beyond "lol random". You ARE improving, though. I'm not saying you need to produce fucking Shakespeare, but a beginning, middle, and end would be nice. Rather than "show up, dance, give guy a severed head, car crash, end." Definitely check out some older 3d movies. There are lots of good comedic shorts than can help you learn how to put together a comedic movie and maybe find your own voice. Also...you really need to stop concerning yourself with percentages and focus more on the criticisms. You're not to a point where percentages should matter. And complaining about someone not rating your movie as highly as you think it should be rated is just...tacky. Don't be that guy.

01-13-2014, 10:10 PM	#19
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	I strongly recommend Michael Sandford. Young, full of talent, definatly someone your age should look on. After nine years, and his movies still hasn't aged. Honestly some of your work aged after the first day. Not saying my work ages though. Mine aged like fucking milk.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

01-14-2014, 04:29 AM	#20
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	it hasn't been nine years
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

01-14-2014, 11:28 AM	#21
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	I watched Bongo by Michael Sandford, and the ending was hilarious! and the animation was really cool. Damn, Michael got-some good gun models goin' on in dat' movie! the music also fit very well with the whole "kill some people, get some (more) weapons, get the money, goto the doctor, penis enlargement (by a billion)" Wait a minute... I think I know what people want me to do! MAKE MY MOVIES lONGAR!

01-14-2014, 06:19 PM	#22
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	I read that as iongar and got confused.

01-14-2014, 08:05 PM	#25
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293	check out some of omniromns stuff, that might inspire you in terms of HMC's and camera movement! just kidding, do not do that
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293