A Fight Scene

A Fight Scene · 02:38 PM

just wanted to see your opinion, i want to improve on some things

3dmmfps or regular 3dmm?

Marko Polo · 11-24-2013, 06:05 PM

Looks really good! The increased framerate works well. Only thing I'd say is to get rid of the dissolve between scenes. Spoils the flow a bit

Theflyingcar · 11-24-2013, 06:08 PM

thanks!.i wanted to slow the video a bit because the scenes were going way too fast,

Toonsville · 11-24-2013, 07:41 PM

The Frame animation looks decent. Keep up the good work.

Broken Pencil · 11-24-2013, 11:44 PM

I already saw this on Youtube, and thought Super Godzilla made this.
EDIT: Jack, how would you give this 91% and give mine 81%?

Dustin Guest · 11-25-2013, 04:37 AM

This LOOKS better than your's. That's why. It's smoother, it's much better animated. I'm not saying it's mindblowing, or anything to it, but it's much better done than your's. (Which I wouldn't take as an insult, because you've improved greatly.)

Broken Pencil · 11-25-2013, 11:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dustin Guest

This LOOKS better than your's. That's why. It's smoother, it's much better animated. I'm not saying it's mindblowing, or anything to it, but it's much better done than your's. (Which I wouldn't take as an insult, because you've improved greatly.)

He used 3DMM FPS. That's why it's so smooth. I didn't.
EDIT:
Hey Dustin, I just saw that Documentary about Mczee. Nice narration!

Adelitas · 11-25-2013, 12:53 PM

3DMM FPS has nothing to do with why his is better, without it - his would still be better.

Dustin Guest · 11-25-2013, 01:18 PM

Yes, he upped the fps, but that's not why it's better. It's just the better animated movie. The movement feels a bit more fluid, and polished. I suggest you stop calling people out for rating other movies higher than your own. Especially given where you are at in skill-level.

Marko Polo · 11-25-2013, 01:46 PM

81% is incredibly generous for your movie. You should be more than happy with that.

Broken Pencil · 11-25-2013, 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dustin Guest

Yes, he upped the fps, but that's not why it's better. It's just the better animated movie. The movement feels a bit more fluid, and polished. I suggest you stop calling people out for rating other movies higher than your own. Especially given where you are at in skill-level.

Oh fine. But I'm still surprised he learned Smooth animation so quickly.

Ben Rice · 11-25-2013, 04:53 PM

stop getting jealous, brock.

Marko Polo · 11-25-2013, 05:15 PM

Yeah it's not a competition. Even if it was its been over for years

Theflyingcar · 11-25-2013, 02:18 PM

thanks to everyone, i learned from some videos on youtube, 1 year i think, i have been making movies but not recording them

Broken Pencil · 11-26-2013, 09:14 PM

Jealousy IS required for no progression.

Ben Rice · 11-26-2013, 09:38 PM

that makes no sense whatsoever. seriously, what the hell are you talking about

Adelitas · 11-26-2013, 10:13 PM

He's basically saying you won't progress if you're jealous, but trying to sound smart and/or mysterious.

He sounds like a twat.

Edward Richtofen · 11-28-2013, 08:10 PM

I think theflyingcar might be a kid. But that's ok! I'm only Ten years old!

Adelitas · 11-29-2013, 12:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Edward Richtofen

But that's ok! I'm only Ten years old!

I still doubt this, I still think imp.

Bown · 11-29-2013, 12:40 PM

It's Brock Obama's new account that he made he said it in the other thread

Adelitas · 11-29-2013, 12:43 PM

I know it's Brock lol, I just mean I don't think he's 10 years old.

Bown · 11-29-2013, 03:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adelitas

I know it's Brock lol, I just mean I don't think he's 10 years old.

oh. you just think everyone's an imp.

Adelitas · 11-29-2013, 03:47 PM

Most of the time I'm right.

Edward Richtofen · 11-29-2013, 04:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adelitas

Most of the time I'm right.

You've heard my voice, Yet you decide to say I'm not 10 years old.

Tuna Hematoma · 11-29-2013, 12:52 PM

Looking good. But when Bo goes into the barrels, I didn't notice him being thrown into them at first. I laughed because I thought he just fell into them for some random reason.

2.5 fish

11-24-2013, 06:05 PM	#2
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721	Looks really good! The increased framerate works well. Only thing I'd say is to get rid of the dissolve between scenes. Spoils the flow a bit
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721

11-25-2013, 12:53 PM	#8
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500	3DMM FPS has nothing to do with why his is better, without it - his would still be better.
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500

11-25-2013, 01:46 PM	#10
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721	81% is incredibly generous for your movie. You should be more than happy with that.
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721

11-25-2013, 04:53 PM	#12
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	stop getting jealous, brock.
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

11-25-2013, 05:15 PM	#13
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721	Yeah it's not a competition. Even if it was its been over for years
Marko Polo Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 721

11-24-2013, 06:08 PM	#3
Theflyingcar Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 254	thanks!.i wanted to slow the video a bit because the scenes were going way too fast,

11-24-2013, 07:41 PM	#4
Toonsville Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,386	The Frame animation looks decent. Keep up the good work.

11-24-2013, 11:44 PM	#5
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	I already saw this on Youtube, and thought Super Godzilla made this. EDIT: Jack, how would you give this 91% and give mine 81%?

11-25-2013, 04:37 AM	#6
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	This LOOKS better than your's. That's why. It's smoother, it's much better animated. I'm not saying it's mindblowing, or anything to it, but it's much better done than your's. (Which I wouldn't take as an insult, because you've improved greatly.)

11-25-2013, 01:18 PM	#9
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Yes, he upped the fps, but that's not why it's better. It's just the better animated movie. The movement feels a bit more fluid, and polished. I suggest you stop calling people out for rating other movies higher than your own. Especially given where you are at in skill-level.

11-25-2013, 02:18 PM	#14
Theflyingcar Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 254	thanks to everyone, i learned from some videos on youtube, 1 year i think, i have been making movies but not recording them

11-26-2013, 09:14 PM	#15
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	Jealousy IS required for no progression.

11-26-2013, 09:38 PM	#16
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	that makes no sense whatsoever. seriously, what the hell are you talking about
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

11-26-2013, 10:13 PM	#17
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500	He's basically saying you won't progress if you're jealous, but trying to sound smart and/or mysterious. He sounds like a twat.
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500

11-28-2013, 08:10 PM	#18
Edward Richtofen Banned Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 23	I think theflyingcar might be a kid. But that's ok! I'm only Ten years old!
Edward Richtofen Banned Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 23

11-29-2013, 12:40 PM	#20
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740	It's Brock Obama's new account that he made he said it in the other thread
Bown Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 18,740

11-29-2013, 12:43 PM	#21
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500	I know it's Brock lol, I just mean I don't think he's 10 years old.
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500

11-29-2013, 03:47 PM	#23
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500	Most of the time I'm right.
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500

11-29-2013, 12:52 PM	#25
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	Looking good. But when Bo goes into the barrels, I didn't notice him being thrown into them at first. I laughed because I thought he just fell into them for some random reason. 2.5 fish