I recorded a new song on the piano

AR-Raven · 10-18-2005, 02:20 AM

http://www.delvarworld.com/music/HerEyes.mp3
I wrote it for and about my girlfriend. A little cheesy, I know. Have a listen if you're bored, I personally find it beautiful.

AR-Raven · 10-20-2005, 05:59 AM

CLICKY!!!!1

Jesterfoot · 10-20-2005, 06:33 AM

I like it 8/10

Richard Bevis · 10-20-2005, 07:43 PM

Hey that was really nice. 8/10.

Mikepjbell · 10-20-2005, 07:48 PM

Nearly brought a tear to my eye dude, made me think about my x-girlfriend and memories :'(

Thanks for letting us hear that.

EDIT: Wait, played it a second time, tears

Klown · 10-20-2005, 07:56 PM

hahahaha hahahahahaha

Mikepjbell · 10-20-2005, 07:57 PM

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Originally posted by Crappy Klown
hahahaha hahahahahaha

Hope you dont mind if i ram my penis down your throat to shut you up.

Brimz · 10-20-2005, 08:00 PM

hahahaha.

Awesome song, Raven.

Klown · 10-20-2005, 08:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mikepjbell

Hope you dont mind if i ram my penis down your throat to shut you up.

It's bringin back the memories

EDIT: yep here come the waterworks :'(

Bloody Bunny · 10-20-2005, 10:22 PM

t'was kool,
tho personally i'd have a rag-time bass bopping along (oom-pah oom-pah) and make it happy and not sad, and have like kerazy syncopations. But its cool how you play it, like normally without that stuff

Blind · 10-20-2005, 10:24 PM

downloading now, <3 piano.

Air Rick · 10-21-2005, 05:13 PM

you can't beat a good piano piece. That was actually very original, and pretty ear-catchy. Make more, and I'll dance at your wedding...to FAST MUSIC ONLY.

Skittlebrau · 10-23-2005, 03:09 AM

This is absolutely beautiful.

Bobby Swisha · 10-23-2005, 03:26 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Mikepjbell

Hope you dont mind if i ram my penis down your throat to shut you up.

SORRY DUDE, you already looked like a pussy when you made this post:

Quote:

Originally posted by Mikepjbell
Nearly brought a tear to my eye dude, made me think about my x-girlfriend and memories :'(

Thanks for letting us hear that.

EDIT: Wait, played it a second time, tears

TOO LATE LOL @ YOU!!!

Air Rick · 10-23-2005, 04:13 AM

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Originally posted by Jon Sprow
This is absolutely beautiful.

that's what i meant by my post...but as i reread what i wrote, it sounded more condescending with the end statement...but yeah, sprow summed up what I wanted to say better..

Air Rick · 10-25-2005, 03:57 AM

seriously though...can you make more? Perhaps you have stuff that you have written that you have yet to record?

Ramza Brave · 10-25-2005, 04:11 AM

I've see you've been taking some sort of lessons with piano, Raven. And you've definately improved alot, since Cade and I used to rape you. Good show.

AR-Raven · 10-26-2005, 03:58 AM

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Originally posted by Eric Russoniello
seriously though...can you make more? Perhaps you have stuff that you have written that you have yet to record?

Yes, eventually. Songs usually take extremely random and acute inspiration to be written, and that hasn't hit me yet.

10-18-2005, 02:20 AM	#1
AR-Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 5,558	I recorded a new song on the piano http://www.delvarworld.com/music/HerEyes.mp3 I wrote it for and about my girlfriend. A little cheesy, I know. Have a listen if you're bored, I personally find it beautiful.
AR-Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 5,558

10-20-2005, 05:59 AM	#2
AR-Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 5,558	CLICKY!!!!1
AR-Raven Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 5,558

10-20-2005, 07:56 PM	#6
Klown Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,640	hahahaha hahahahahaha
Klown Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,640

10-20-2005, 08:00 PM	#8
Brimz Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 6,317	hahahaha. Awesome song, Raven.
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10-20-2005, 10:24 PM	#11
Blind Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,618	downloading now, <3 piano.
Blind Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,618

10-20-2005, 06:33 AM	#3
Jesterfoot Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,470	I like it 8/10

10-20-2005, 07:43 PM	#4
Richard Bevis Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 2,190	Hey that was really nice. 8/10.

10-20-2005, 07:48 PM	#5
Mikepjbell Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 3,874	Nearly brought a tear to my eye dude, made me think about my x-girlfriend and memories :'( Thanks for letting us hear that. EDIT: Wait, played it a second time, tears

10-20-2005, 10:22 PM	#10
Bloody Bunny Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 123	t'was kool, tho personally i'd have a rag-time bass bopping along (oom-pah oom-pah) and make it happy and not sad, and have like kerazy syncopations. But its cool how you play it, like normally without that stuff

10-21-2005, 05:13 PM	#12
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733	you can't beat a good piano piece. That was actually very original, and pretty ear-catchy. Make more, and I'll dance at your wedding...to FAST MUSIC ONLY.
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733

10-23-2005, 03:09 AM	#13
Skittlebrau Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 8,804	This is absolutely beautiful.

10-25-2005, 03:57 AM	#16
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733	seriously though...can you make more? Perhaps you have stuff that you have written that you have yet to record?
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733

10-25-2005, 04:11 AM	#17
Ramza Brave Banned Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 7,843	I've see you've been taking some sort of lessons with piano, Raven. And you've definately improved alot, since Cade and I used to rape you. Good show.
Ramza Brave Banned Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 7,843