Sunny Funny's Demented Short Movie

Jt Copper · 08-12-2013, 11:15 AM

haha, uh wow.

Um, it was okay, and thats really pushing the term to a high level. Some of the jokes could have been funnier if they just wern't paced so quickly. I mean for one second you have have the annoying punchline, and then you have something else completely different happen immediatly after, it just left me wondering "What the fuck just happen there!?

" There is potential here, just focus more on the main plot rather then trying to get a few quick chuckles at different little things. Try watching other peoples movies like Vlarion, 5DMM, N.U.T.S., Big Movie 1 & 2 * nudge nudge, wink wink *, just try and find out what makes a great 3dmm movie. Overall though, okay but could have been better.
35/100

Jt Copper · 11:17 AM

Turtle soup.

Adelitas · 08-12-2013, 07:34 PM

No wonder people aren't making/releasing movies nowadays, the competition is clearly too great.

Groobymyfriend · 08-17-2013, 02:03 PM

This was before MagicMonkey edited the movie. Also, the reason I made this was because MagicMonkey kept telling me to make the 3DMM when we were chatting on Skype. Also, couldn't he just made it in the first place?

Broken Pencil · 11-02-2013, 01:38 PM

This is umm... Interesting.

08-12-2013, 11:15 AM	#2
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	haha, uh wow. Um, it was okay, and thats really pushing the term to a high level. Some of the jokes could have been funnier if they just wern't paced so quickly. I mean for one second you have have the annoying punchline, and then you have something else completely different happen immediatly after, it just left me wondering "What the fuck just happen there!? " There is potential here, just focus more on the main plot rather then trying to get a few quick chuckles at different little things. Try watching other peoples movies like Vlarion, 5DMM, N.U.T.S., Big Movie 1 & 2 * nudge nudge, wink wink *, just try and find out what makes a great 3dmm movie. Overall though, okay but could have been better. 35/100
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

08-12-2013, 11:16 AM	#3
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Turtle soup.
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08-12-2013, 07:34 PM	#4
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500	No wonder people aren't making/releasing movies nowadays, the competition is clearly too great.
Adelitas Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 1,500

08-17-2013, 02:03 PM	#5
Groobymyfriend Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 29	This was before MagicMonkey edited the movie. Also, the reason I made this was because MagicMonkey kept telling me to make the 3DMM when we were chatting on Skype. Also, couldn't he just made it in the first place?

11-02-2013, 01:38 PM	#6
Broken Pencil Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 2,341	This is umm... Interesting.