Teenagers Trick or Treating Comic Strip

Toonsville · 10-14-2012, 09:17 PM

Here is my very first Comic strip that I drew and it's about that the two Teenagers are being in Disguise as tommy Torribinson the Beaver and his girlfriend Molly Sweetswell the Squirrel to Play Trick or Treat in Halloween.

Dominator Dan · 10-14-2012, 11:03 PM

yeah yeah THEN what happens?

haha i've actually JUST THIS SECOND COME BACK from drawing a trick or treat comic strip myself, not finished it yet though.

Cubert · 10-14-2012, 11:14 PM

haha yeah sorry man this needs a punchline?

i'm gonna sound really lame now but even for the post-modern anti-joke non-punchline effect, you're still 2 frames over the "norm". because sadly that shit DOES have a norm, man.

Phil Williamson · 10-14-2012, 11:14 PM

haha yeah there doesn't seem to be a joke here. also why did you name one of the characters after Torrobinson?

Cubert · 10-14-2012, 11:18 PM

if the punchline is that the teeth and nose of the costume in the bottom left panel look like an unsettling snake monster, you buried that joke too deep, man

Bobby Swisha · 10-15-2012, 01:34 AM

haha I think its great without the punchline

Evil Ash · 10-15-2012, 01:39 AM

I dug around his Deviant Art page and I think the joke is that the two animal costumes are actually characters from his strips, so two teenagers are dressing up as characters from his strip, and it's like a crossover or something...

HMC · 10-15-2012, 02:29 AM

Haha why is the guy literally Gabe from Penny Arcade?

Evil Ash · 10-15-2012, 04:56 AM

Haha holy shit, it is! Exactly!

Oh man JD, you stealin characters now?

Edit: Oh man the beaver is wearing that shirt in like, every drawing of him.

Lord Blazer · 10-15-2012, 05:19 AM

This is p good

Anthropophagus · 10-16-2012, 01:55 AM

Aw, I was really disappointed to learn that it's supposed to be a crossover because the comic at face value is fucking hilarious. It goes absolutely nowhere and doesn't form a joke. Just two romantically involved people talking about and then going through with trick or treating. Oh well - it sucks as a crossover.

Anthropophagus · 10-16-2012, 01:56 AM

Hahahahhaa, and the surprised face of the guy they're trick or treating. So good.

Bown · 10-17-2012, 01:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Anthropophagus

Aw, I was really disappointed to learn that it's supposed to be a crossover because the comic at face value is fucking hilarious. It goes absolutely nowhere and doesn't form a joke. Just two romantically involved people talking about and then going through with trick or treating. Oh well - it sucks as a crossover.

Actually, you had it right. This is just how Deakin rolls. He draws random characters doing menial crap and that's why this is so good.

10-14-2012, 09:17 PM	#1
Toonsville Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 1,386	Teenagers Trick or Treating Comic Strip Here is my very first Comic strip that I drew and it's about that the two Teenagers are being in Disguise as tommy Torribinson the Beaver and his girlfriend Molly Sweetswell the Squirrel to Play Trick or Treat in Halloween.

10-14-2012, 11:14 PM	#3
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990	haha yeah sorry man this needs a punchline? i'm gonna sound really lame now but even for the post-modern anti-joke non-punchline effect, you're still 2 frames over the "norm". because sadly that shit DOES have a norm, man.
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990

10-14-2012, 11:18 PM	#5
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990	if the punchline is that the teeth and nose of the costume in the bottom left panel look like an unsettling snake monster, you buried that joke too deep, man
Cubert Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 4,990

10-15-2012, 01:39 AM	#7
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	I dug around his Deviant Art page and I think the joke is that the two animal costumes are actually characters from his strips, so two teenagers are dressing up as characters from his strip, and it's like a crossover or something...
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

10-15-2012, 02:29 AM	#8
HMC Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 8,715	Haha why is the guy literally Gabe from Penny Arcade?
HMC Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 8,715

10-14-2012, 11:03 PM	#2
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	yeah yeah THEN what happens? haha i've actually JUST THIS SECOND COME BACK from drawing a trick or treat comic strip myself, not finished it yet though.

10-14-2012, 11:14 PM	#4
Phil Williamson Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 16,900	haha yeah there doesn't seem to be a joke here. also why did you name one of the characters after Torrobinson?

10-15-2012, 01:34 AM	#6
Bobby Swisha Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 46,012	haha I think its great without the punchline

10-15-2012, 04:56 AM	#9
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	Haha holy shit, it is! Exactly! Oh man JD, you stealin characters now? Edit: Oh man the beaver is wearing that shirt in like, every drawing of him.
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

10-15-2012, 05:19 AM	#10
Lord Blazer Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 16,879	This is p good

10-16-2012, 01:55 AM	#11
Anthropophagus Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 5,997	Aw, I was really disappointed to learn that it's supposed to be a crossover because the comic at face value is fucking hilarious. It goes absolutely nowhere and doesn't form a joke. Just two romantically involved people talking about and then going through with trick or treating. Oh well - it sucks as a crossover.

10-16-2012, 01:56 AM	#12
Anthropophagus Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 5,997	Hahahahhaa, and the surprised face of the guy they're trick or treating. So good.