Pasadena Island

Breed · 08-10-2012, 02:49 AM

nice, man.

Evil Ash · 08-10-2012, 03:16 AM

It's really nice, and I like it - but the edge of the cliff, at the garage - that just ruins it.

Would have been nice to see like shattered wood and etc.

Bobby Swisha · 08-12-2012, 09:48 PM

Airplane looks out of place but still looks kinda cool. The rest looks pretty good. I find a lot of your pieces have compositions that are just kind of a bit off for me.

Fish Taco · 08-14-2012, 05:15 AM

What throws me off is the horizon being on an angle - a good trick is to make sure it's always a horizontal.

Omnirom · 08-14-2012, 10:42 AM

What the fuck kind of comment is that? Anyway, good drawing, looks awesome.

Dominator Dan · 08-14-2012, 01:54 PM

similar to what BR said, it's a cool image, love the colours, but the plane looks a bit off, not saying you should get rid of it, but maybe have it closer to the rest of the scenery, so the whole things works as one, LIKE THIS:

(only with more photoshop tlc lol)

edit: though it does look a bit close to the road with no runway in sight, maybe if it was smaller it would make more sense i dunno PLAY AROUND WITH IT

Gorosaurus · 08-15-2012, 04:54 AM

Best stuff I've seen from you so far, Jesterfoot! But definitely check out Dan's advice to make it stronger compositionally

Don Tickner · 08-15-2012, 07:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Ash

It's really nice, and I like it - but the edge of the cliff, at the garage - that just ruins it.

I agree; this was more of an issue to me than the composition. Moving the plane is a good idea, however I'd prioritise fixing this.

Still good stuff though; most compositional shots feel like compositional shots. This actually has a bit of a natural vibe, which is solid.

Fish Taco · 08-16-2012, 03:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Omnirom

What the fuck kind of comment is that? Anyway, good drawing, looks awesome.

LOL what you? It's a common rule of thumb in photography.

Although depending on the subject it can be broken for effect but I don't think it works in this context.

08-10-2012, 12:39 AM	#1
Jesterfoot Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,470	Pasadena Island

08-10-2012, 02:49 AM	#2
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768	nice, man.
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08-10-2012, 03:16 AM	#3
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	It's really nice, and I like it - but the edge of the cliff, at the garage - that just ruins it. Would have been nice to see like shattered wood and etc.
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

08-14-2012, 05:15 AM	#5
Fish Taco Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 7,034	What throws me off is the horizon being on an angle - a good trick is to make sure it's always a horizontal.
Fish Taco Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 7,034

08-14-2012, 10:42 AM	#6
Omnirom Banned Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 569	What the fuck kind of comment is that? Anyway, good drawing, looks awesome.
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08-12-2012, 09:48 PM	#4
Bobby Swisha Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 46,012	Airplane looks out of place but still looks kinda cool. The rest looks pretty good. I find a lot of your pieces have compositions that are just kind of a bit off for me.

08-14-2012, 01:54 PM	#7
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	similar to what BR said, it's a cool image, love the colours, but the plane looks a bit off, not saying you should get rid of it, but maybe have it closer to the rest of the scenery, so the whole things works as one, LIKE THIS: (only with more photoshop tlc lol) edit: though it does look a bit close to the road with no runway in sight, maybe if it was smaller it would make more sense i dunno PLAY AROUND WITH IT

08-15-2012, 04:54 AM	#8
Gorosaurus Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 16,146	Best stuff I've seen from you so far, Jesterfoot! But definitely check out Dan's advice to make it stronger compositionally