Darth Vader in the Death Star Canteen

Darth Vader in the Death Star Canteen · 08:43 PM

using a sketch from Eddie izzard it truly comes to life on the screen this is funny and i hope you all enjoy it

Dominator Dan · 01-19-2011, 09:09 PM

i enjoyed the video adaptation but jesus christ that starts at 5 minutes in, it takes 2 minutes for the text to go away, i can't believe how long it took for the word CANTEEN to show up.

you could have cut that all down to about 10 seconds, instead of just having FUNNY BONES over and over again. and the bits of him just running through the death star, that was the most unnecessary thing.

all you really needed was the bit from 5 minutes to 8 minutes, i didn't bother watching the rest of the movie after the izzard extract finished cause i assumed it would just be the same later on

Funny Bones · 01:23 PM

ok thank you for your comments i am re editing my movie to shorten it & will be adding the new improved verion tomorrow

Lord Blazer · 01-19-2011, 11:02 PM

holy shit the movie really doesn't start until 5 minutes in

Trooper · 01-19-2011, 11:14 PM

Yeah, it needs to be cut to just Izzard's gag. The people coming in and out were a bit of a distraction but, on the other hand, made it more authentic. The best part was the joke itself, which was the only bit you didn't do, but this is often the case when people animate to pre-made audio, so don't take it personally. And hey, the animating was better than your past movies, so keep it up.

Old Rivers · 01-19-2011, 11:30 PM

I thought the people going in and out were good details. Made it more interesting. I particularly like how everyone returns their trays before fleeing the canteen in terror. Also, I loved that you had Mczee: The Man Behind the Movies on the T.V.

Keep it up!

Funny Bones · 01:25 PM

ok i have put a new link on this movie and i made it a bit shorter so now its 9 mins

Dominator Dan · 01-20-2011, 07:31 PM

haha it only has to be 3, your intros are too long

"Funny Bones productions presents"

"A funny bones short film"

"by funny bones"

"btw did i mention it was by me, funny bones?"

you don't need all that at all, especially not for the length of time that it's there. i can sympathize though, a lot of my movies back in 1999 had so much 3d text doing all the default animations over and over

Trooper · 01-20-2011, 07:35 PM

Yeah, it really just needs to be the Izzard part with a tiny intro and outro.

Old Rivers · 01-20-2011, 08:10 PM

Also, shouldn't it be Cantina?

Phil Williamson · 01-20-2011, 09:57 PM

Funny Bones · 01:27 PM

ok you guys i know you all think it should be shorter but i was just having fun with it i wanted to add some 3d letter & the space fight at the end

Old Rivers · 01-21-2011, 08:46 PM

Well, the main problem was the title staying on the screen for a really long time at the beginning.

Banana Pancake · 01-21-2011, 08:55 PM

And not having proper lines in the movie, eh Rivers?

Old Rivers · 01-21-2011, 09:00 PM

Sorry, I was sick last weekend

This weekend for sure!

Jt Copper · 01-23-2011, 05:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Funny Bones

ever wondered what it would be like if the death star had a canteen, & darth vader went for his dinner

no.

Old Rivers · 01-23-2011, 06:01 AM

Then why are you in the thread?

Jt Copper · 01-23-2011, 06:44 AM

Touche'

Dominator Dan · 01-23-2011, 02:21 PM

hahaha ey yo JT GOT RIVER'D OLDSTYLE

Jt Copper · 01-23-2011, 03:50 PM

Only cause I made it that way.

Banana Pancake · 01-23-2011, 03:57 PM

I wish I was like Jt Copper, he is so cool.

Jt Copper · 09:36 PM

... Your being Sarcastic arnt you?

Trooper · 01-23-2011, 06:45 PM

hahaha ey yo JT GOT PANCAKE'D OLDSTYLE

Banana Pancake · 01-23-2011, 07:11 PM

No Copper, I was being serious. I would love to be you, I dislike having to put my underwear on, and having to poop on my own. You're a fortunate one.

Jt Copper · 01-23-2011, 09:36 PM

..... Your being Sarcastic arnt you?

01-19-2011, 10:53 PM	#3
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585	ok thank you for your comments i am re editing my movie to shorten it & will be adding the new improved verion tomorrow
	Last edited by Funny Bones : 08-08-2017 at 01:23 PM.

01-19-2011, 11:14 PM	#5
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441	Yeah, it needs to be cut to just Izzard's gag. The people coming in and out were a bit of a distraction but, on the other hand, made it more authentic. The best part was the joke itself, which was the only bit you didn't do, but this is often the case when people animate to pre-made audio, so don't take it personally. And hey, the animating was better than your past movies, so keep it up.
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441

01-20-2011, 05:49 PM	#7
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585	ok i have put a new link on this movie and i made it a bit shorter so now its 9 mins
	Last edited by Funny Bones : 08-08-2017 at 01:25 PM.

01-20-2011, 07:35 PM	#9
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441	Yeah, it really just needs to be the Izzard part with a tiny intro and outro.
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441

01-21-2011, 11:59 AM	#12
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585	ok you guys i know you all think it should be shorter but i was just having fun with it i wanted to add some 3d letter & the space fight at the end
	Last edited by Funny Bones : 08-08-2017 at 01:27 PM.

01-19-2011, 09:09 PM	#2
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	i enjoyed the video adaptation but jesus christ that starts at 5 minutes in, it takes 2 minutes for the text to go away, i can't believe how long it took for the word CANTEEN to show up. you could have cut that all down to about 10 seconds, instead of just having FUNNY BONES over and over again. and the bits of him just running through the death star, that was the most unnecessary thing. all you really needed was the bit from 5 minutes to 8 minutes, i didn't bother watching the rest of the movie after the izzard extract finished cause i assumed it would just be the same later on

01-19-2011, 11:02 PM	#4
Lord Blazer Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 16,879	holy shit the movie really doesn't start until 5 minutes in

01-19-2011, 11:30 PM	#6
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	I thought the people going in and out were good details. Made it more interesting. I particularly like how everyone returns their trays before fleeing the canteen in terror. Also, I loved that you had Mczee: The Man Behind the Movies on the T.V. Keep it up!

01-20-2011, 07:31 PM	#8
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	haha it only has to be 3, your intros are too long "Funny Bones productions presents" "A funny bones short film" "by funny bones" "btw did i mention it was by me, funny bones?" you don't need all that at all, especially not for the length of time that it's there. i can sympathize though, a lot of my movies back in 1999 had so much 3d text doing all the default animations over and over

01-20-2011, 08:10 PM	#10
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Also, shouldn't it be Cantina?

01-20-2011, 09:57 PM	#11
Phil Williamson Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 16,900	No

01-21-2011, 08:46 PM	#13
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Well, the main problem was the title staying on the screen for a really long time at the beginning.

01-21-2011, 08:55 PM	#14
Banana Pancake Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 320	And not having proper lines in the movie, eh Rivers?
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01-21-2011, 09:00 PM	#15
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Sorry, I was sick last weekend This weekend for sure!

01-23-2011, 06:01 AM	#17
Old Rivers Super Moderator Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 6,985	Then why are you in the thread?

01-23-2011, 06:44 AM	#18
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Touche'
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01-23-2011, 02:21 PM	#19
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	hahaha ey yo JT GOT RIVER'D OLDSTYLE

01-23-2011, 03:50 PM	#20
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Only cause I made it that way.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

01-23-2011, 03:57 PM	#21
Banana Pancake Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 320	I wish I was like Jt Copper, he is so cool.
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01-23-2011, 04:13 PM	#22
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	... Your being Sarcastic arnt you?
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01-23-2011, 06:45 PM	#23
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441	hahaha ey yo JT GOT PANCAKE'D OLDSTYLE
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01-23-2011, 07:11 PM	#24
Banana Pancake Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 320	No Copper, I was being serious. I would love to be you, I dislike having to put my underwear on, and having to poop on my own. You're a fortunate one.
Banana Pancake Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 320

01-23-2011, 09:36 PM	#25
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	..... Your being Sarcastic arnt you?
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