metallic ranger part two

metallic ranger part two · 08:58 PM

metallic ranger heads into roberts house to see if hes o.k. and along the way, he meets an agent and him and ranger get adrift at sea.
NOTICE: a water creature takes place in the story, but its not the best creature here.
but heres part two, enjoy!

(part three may not be out for a while)
EDIT: there was a sound error, and now I fixed It!
sorry for the people that already downloaded the movie, download it again.
I really didnt hear the errors untill it was too late... My bad.

Nixon · 08-24-2010, 02:11 PM

couldn't you have just done this in one whole movie instead of different parts? and the sea monster was disappointing, nice work though

Phil Williamson · 08-24-2010, 04:47 PM

Again, not terrible. Like part one, I'd say sound effects and music were the biggest strengths. There were some issues with voices in this one though - while they're tied up on the boat, for example, I couldn't tell what anyone was saying at all.

I'd agree with Bill that it would probably be better to release these as longer parts less frequently - having to keep up with a new 3- or 4-minute chunk every couple of days is going to get annoying pretty quickly. Longer sections might also help with plot continuity - most of this episode seemed entirely unrelated to what happened in episode one, and while I'm sure it'll all come together, it'd be nice if that didn't take several parts to happen.

Again, though, this series shows promise, and please do keep it up.

Compcat · 08-26-2010, 05:53 AM

I'm already seeing improvement. I enjoy the certain little effects when it's obvious you're experimenting and they just work well, such as him kicking in the door in the first scene. I also like how direct the continuation of the series was, almost like the next episode of an action cartoon or something.

I also think the old school style is pretty cool, though it makes me have to ask, why aren't you using v3dmm?

Good choice on the music, I'm glad you aren't using midi.

The narration in this one and the last one is cheesy, but effective. Until you get a more natural sense of pacing and dialogue, it helps to keep the movie from being silent (and his comment about the walls made me chuckle).

Actually, I take back what I said about the music, at least in this one case, it is drowning out the voices of the characters completely. I'm going to have to turn down the volume myself. That is not a very cool mistake to make.

Also him walking slowly (literally) all the way across the room just to get attacked by an enemy outside of the screen was really lazy and really obvious.
The shot of the lake was pretty well done.

All in all, good job. I look forward to the next one.

Jt Copper · 08-27-2010, 08:40 PM

thank you for the review compcat. And to let you know why Im not using V3DMM is because Its a picky bitch and It works only when It wants to, I FREAKING HATE THAT GODDAMN THING... But yeah, thanks for your comments but eh... the series does not work out well to me, to tell you the truth (like my brother really did make random animation

) this was an unfinished game I worked on with my dad for 2 years (till my shitty ass computer shot

) untill I decided to made a movie series... I wish I had the MR game back.

Jt Copper · 03:58 PM

I need a fish, can anyone make a good fish creature, I.E.
EDIT: Never mind.

Lord Blazer · 09-22-2010, 10:39 PM

That's not a fish

Tuna Hematoma · 09-22-2010, 10:59 PM

looks like something I made in spore when drunk

Jt Copper · 09-23-2010, 12:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lord Blazer

That's not a fish

thats a demon fish, spawned out of the metallic comet!

Funny Bones · 10-15-2016, 03:08 PM

https://f001.backblaze.com/file/3dmmtv/ZpBw.mp4

08-24-2010, 02:11 PM	#2
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293	couldn't you have just done this in one whole movie instead of different parts? and the sea monster was disappointing, nice work though
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293

08-26-2010, 05:53 AM	#4
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	I'm already seeing improvement. I enjoy the certain little effects when it's obvious you're experimenting and they just work well, such as him kicking in the door in the first scene. I also like how direct the continuation of the series was, almost like the next episode of an action cartoon or something. I also think the old school style is pretty cool, though it makes me have to ask, why aren't you using v3dmm? Good choice on the music, I'm glad you aren't using midi. The narration in this one and the last one is cheesy, but effective. Until you get a more natural sense of pacing and dialogue, it helps to keep the movie from being silent (and his comment about the walls made me chuckle). Actually, I take back what I said about the music, at least in this one case, it is drowning out the voices of the characters completely. I'm going to have to turn down the volume myself. That is not a very cool mistake to make. Also him walking slowly (literally) all the way across the room just to get attacked by an enemy outside of the screen was really lazy and really obvious. The shot of the lake was pretty well done. All in all, good job. I look forward to the next one.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

08-27-2010, 08:40 PM	#5
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	thank you for the review compcat. And to let you know why Im not using V3DMM is because Its a picky bitch and It works only when It wants to, I FREAKING HATE THAT GODDAMN THING... But yeah, thanks for your comments but eh... the series does not work out well to me, to tell you the truth (like my brother really did make random animation ) this was an unfinished game I worked on with my dad for 2 years (till my shitty ass computer shot ) untill I decided to made a movie series... I wish I had the MR game back.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463

09-22-2010, 09:32 PM	#6
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	I need a fish, can anyone make a good fish creature, I.E. EDIT: Never mind.
Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Last edited by Jt Copper : 08-03-2011 at 03:58 PM.

08-24-2010, 04:47 PM	#3
Phil Williamson Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 16,900	Again, not terrible. Like part one, I'd say sound effects and music were the biggest strengths. There were some issues with voices in this one though - while they're tied up on the boat, for example, I couldn't tell what anyone was saying at all. I'd agree with Bill that it would probably be better to release these as longer parts less frequently - having to keep up with a new 3- or 4-minute chunk every couple of days is going to get annoying pretty quickly. Longer sections might also help with plot continuity - most of this episode seemed entirely unrelated to what happened in episode one, and while I'm sure it'll all come together, it'd be nice if that didn't take several parts to happen. Again, though, this series shows promise, and please do keep it up.

09-22-2010, 10:39 PM	#7
Lord Blazer Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 16,879	That's not a fish

09-22-2010, 10:59 PM	#8
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	looks like something I made in spore when drunk

10-15-2016, 03:08 PM	#10
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585	https://f001.backblaze.com/file/3dmmtv/ZpBw.mp4