A Little Help (Youtube, Subtitles)

Nixon · 03-12-2010, 06:13 PM

positive criticism please

Nixon · 03-12-2010, 08:05 PM

any comments?

Tuna Hematoma · 03-13-2010, 02:15 AM

I liked the sniper view.

Lord Cardigan · 03-16-2010, 04:07 PM

I didn't really like the voice acting, but otherwise it was O.K

Ned · 03-20-2010, 03:36 AM

It made me smile.

Which... might not be the intended reaction, but yes.

Martin Vu · 04-13-2010, 07:14 PM

Awesome i liked the sniper view best!

Waseemvy · 05-05-2010, 12:04 AM

funny and great sniper view

Lord Blazer · 05-05-2010, 12:29 AM

Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go:

1: Needs better voice acting
2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes
3: If you add subtitles it's a good idea to spell check them and make sure they match the dialogue
4: The president is black
5: If you snipe someone near a car the car doesn't fall over

Yanni · 05-05-2010, 01:05 AM

it was k

Yanni · 05-05-2010, 01:11 AM

[quote=Lord Blazer]Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go:

2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes

it really doesn't matter if you use the default scenes.

Lord Blazer · 05-05-2010, 04:30 AM

Speaking as someone who was making 3dmm movies 10 years ago, it really does.

Air Rick · 05-05-2010, 03:00 PM

If he was sleeping in the desert at night he would have froze to death. This movie is completely unbelievable.

Nixon · 05-05-2010, 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eric Ryan

If he was sleeping in the desert at night he would have froze to death. This movie is completely unbelievable.

its an animation.

Air Rick · 05-05-2010, 04:18 PM

he is shivering? He doesn't seem cold, Bill....

Evil Ash · 05-05-2010, 11:31 PM

Hahah when the president falls over and knocks over the car I fucking pissed myself.

Good show.

Compcat · 06-05-2010, 07:32 PM

Just watched this. I'm actually pretty impressed, it's definitely an improvement over some of your other movies, especially considering the fact that there's actually a story. As ash said, the president falling over and knocking over the car was pretty funny. I also really liked how cool his old alleyway looked after he got his money.

I'd suggest trying to stop using default scenery altogether, that's the major boundary here keeping your movies in "noob" territory. Work on building scenery by hand with various methods. Try deconstructing different scenes in some of our movies to see how it's done (especially in v3dmm where it's more complicated and possibly a little intimidating) Otherwise, I think most of the other improvements will come naturally. Keep it up.

Nixon · 06-05-2010, 07:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Compcat

Just watched this. I'm actually pretty impressed, it's definitely an improvement over some of your other movies, especially considering the fact that there's actually a story. As ash said, the president falling over and knocking over the car was pretty funny. I also really liked how cool his old alleyway looked when he got his money.

I'd suggest trying to stop using default scenery altogether, that's the major boundary here keeping your movies in "noob" territory. Otherwise, I think most of the other improvements will come naturally. Keep it up.

thanks man! these kind off comments give me some help to keep on making films, much appreciated!

Air Rick · 06-08-2010, 08:36 PM

you know i was kidding, right Bill...?

Nixon · 06-08-2010, 08:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eric Ryan

you know i was kidding, right Bill...?

haha okay

Mabdog · 06-08-2010, 09:52 PM

yeah I liked it. Keep it up.

03-12-2010, 06:13 PM	#2
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293	positive criticism please
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293

03-12-2010, 08:05 PM	#3
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293	any comments?
Nixon Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 4,293

03-20-2010, 03:36 AM	#6
Ned Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,742	It made me smile. Which... might not be the intended reaction, but yes.
Ned Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,742

04-13-2010, 07:14 PM	#7
Martin Vu Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 167	Awesome i liked the sniper view best!
Martin Vu Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 167

05-05-2010, 12:04 AM	#8
Waseemvy Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 12	funny and great sniper view
Waseemvy Junior Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 12

03-13-2010, 02:15 AM	#4
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	I liked the sniper view.

03-16-2010, 04:07 PM	#5
Lord Cardigan Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 350	I didn't really like the voice acting, but otherwise it was O.K

05-05-2010, 12:29 AM	#9
Lord Blazer Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 16,879	Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go: 1: Needs better voice acting 2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes 3: If you add subtitles it's a good idea to spell check them and make sure they match the dialogue 4: The president is black 5: If you snipe someone near a car the car doesn't fall over

05-05-2010, 01:05 AM	#10
Yanni Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 39	it was k
Yanni Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 39

05-05-2010, 01:11 AM	#11
Yanni Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 39	[quote=Lord Blazer]Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go: 2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes it really doesn't matter if you use the default scenes.
Yanni Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 39

05-05-2010, 04:30 AM	#12
Lord Blazer Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 16,879	Speaking as someone who was making 3dmm movies 10 years ago, it really does.

05-05-2010, 03:00 PM	#13
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733	If he was sleeping in the desert at night he would have froze to death. This movie is completely unbelievable.
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733

05-05-2010, 04:18 PM	#15
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733	he is shivering? He doesn't seem cold, Bill....
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733

05-05-2010, 11:31 PM	#16
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	Hahah when the president falls over and knocks over the car I fucking pissed myself. Good show.
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

06-05-2010, 07:32 PM	#17
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Just watched this. I'm actually pretty impressed, it's definitely an improvement over some of your other movies, especially considering the fact that there's actually a story. As ash said, the president falling over and knocking over the car was pretty funny. I also really liked how cool his old alleyway looked after he got his money. I'd suggest trying to stop using default scenery altogether, that's the major boundary here keeping your movies in "noob" territory. Work on building scenery by hand with various methods. Try deconstructing different scenes in some of our movies to see how it's done (especially in v3dmm where it's more complicated and possibly a little intimidating) Otherwise, I think most of the other improvements will come naturally. Keep it up.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

06-08-2010, 08:36 PM	#19
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733	you know i was kidding, right Bill...?
Air Rick Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 6,733

06-08-2010, 09:52 PM	#21
Mabdog Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 5,670	yeah I liked it. Keep it up.
Mabdog Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 5,670