Stranded Trailer

Stranded Trailer · 03:07 AM

This is mine, as well as Jayrod's, first ever uploaded movie.

This is a trailer for a planned short series of ours. It basically shows how they ended up on their little "paradise."

Comments and criticism welcome!

Dominator Dan · 06-16-2009, 02:40 PM

as soon as the logo finished i was like whoa this guy has some SKILL, i could tell from the screenshot that this was worth downloading, and yeah i'd love to see how this turns out but i have TO SAY

the music, oh man, haha that doesn't work AT ALL, it kinda ruined it for me, it seemed very cliche the whole, funny description of characters with this cheesy punk music.

i suggest you get a bunch of jungle music from crash bandicoot, it's what i do

i'm not dissing the movie idea i just think it could have been INTRODUCED a little better N'AM SAYIN?

and yeah the wooden title hanging on vines was awesome

Jayrod · 06-16-2009, 06:21 PM

If it isn't too much trouble, could a mod please stick my name as a creator of this preview? And thanks for your opinion, Dan. We'll take your suggestion into consideration.

Edit: Thanks HMC.

ShadowFox · 06-16-2009, 07:04 PM

Yeah, the punk music was a bit much but I liked the irony it brings because they're anything but happy together.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dominator Dan

i'm not dissing the movie idea i just think it could have been INTRODUCED a little better N'AM SAYIN?

Yeah, but hopefully it'll make up for it when it finally comes together. I don't take it as dissing, just crit. Criticism is what makes me work harder, the compliments are just a bonus that motivate me. Thanks Dan.

Sarat · 06-19-2009, 09:48 AM

hey its cool man specially the way the main title comes

Dustin Guest · 06-22-2009, 09:53 PM

Link's dead

ShadowFox · 06-23-2009, 03:08 AM

Fixed.

Liam Brocklehurst · 07-30-2009, 12:19 AM

Really like the look of this, great to see something fresh!

Jayrod · 09-10-2009, 01:46 AM

This series may not happen...

I'm gonna try talking ShadowFox back into making it, but for now it's dead.

06-16-2009, 06:21 PM	#3
Jayrod Super Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 615	If it isn't too much trouble, could a mod please stick my name as a creator of this preview? And thanks for your opinion, Dan. We'll take your suggestion into consideration. Edit: Thanks HMC.
Jayrod Super Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 615

06-19-2009, 09:48 AM	#5
Sarat Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 246	hey its cool man specially the way the main title comes
Sarat Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 246

06-23-2009, 03:08 AM	#7
ShadowFox Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 21	Fixed.
ShadowFox Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 21

09-10-2009, 01:46 AM	#9
Jayrod Super Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 615	This series may not happen... I'm gonna try talking ShadowFox back into making it, but for now it's dead.
Jayrod Super Moderator Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 615

06-16-2009, 02:40 PM	#2
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	as soon as the logo finished i was like whoa this guy has some SKILL, i could tell from the screenshot that this was worth downloading, and yeah i'd love to see how this turns out but i have TO SAY the music, oh man, haha that doesn't work AT ALL, it kinda ruined it for me, it seemed very cliche the whole, funny description of characters with this cheesy punk music. i suggest you get a bunch of jungle music from crash bandicoot, it's what i do i'm not dissing the movie idea i just think it could have been INTRODUCED a little better N'AM SAYIN? and yeah the wooden title hanging on vines was awesome

06-22-2009, 09:53 PM	#6
Dustin Guest Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,420	Link's dead

07-30-2009, 12:19 AM	#8
Liam Brocklehurst Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 4,143	Really like the look of this, great to see something fresh!