Factory

Factory · 01:37 AM

DAY 1 MOVIE 2:

Pizza the Hut takes us on an abstract ride in this one!!!

Tomorrow, for Day 2, will be Liam Brocklehurst's fun movie!!! WOOOO GET EXCITED omg

Rabid Dinosaur · 09-17-2008, 01:37 AM

It is an interesting idea, if not entirely apparent from watching the movie.

Space Goat · 09-17-2008, 01:40 AM

It's incredibly difficult to pull off abstract movies in 3D Movie Maker, as it is so unnatural, but this is definitely a good one.

Stan Pennant · 09-17-2008, 01:49 AM

One thing it definitely has going for it is that it's so short, that you feel compelled to watch it again, just for the ride.

Compcat · 09-17-2008, 01:51 AM

Sorry, but I didn't like this. There were a couple of interesting shots, but otherwise it was pretty lame. It doesn't work well as serious or as a spoof (I can't really tell).

Stan Pennant · 09-17-2008, 01:54 AM

If it wasn’t for the cartoony nature of 3DMM and Gustave’s permanent smile, it would be allot easier to know whether or not to take it seriously.

Slade · 09-17-2008, 02:07 AM

Too abstract for me to be intrigued, really.

Jesterfoot · 09-17-2008, 02:17 AM

Interesting. I don't really get it though. This should have elaborated more into into whatever idea it was trying to communicate. Way too short.

3/10

Though I'm still curious

Eric Burger · 09-17-2008, 03:01 AM

Alright, but not too interesting. Also very short. Probably won't watch it twice.

Ben Rice · 09-17-2008, 07:04 AM

It was ok.

Based Scrooge · 04:30 AM

Aaron Haynes · 09-17-2008, 07:47 AM

Felt like an interesting start that doesn't go anywhere. I'm not opposed to abstract movies by any means, but give me enough to work with, you know? Hold my attention and show me something that's not just compelling, but resolves itself. This felt like you stopped because you ran out of time, not like you chose to end it where you did.

Consider expanding on it, wondering what it's about and where it would "logically" go in your mind.

Dominator Dan · 09-17-2008, 10:23 AM

Yeah agreed with the last 2 posts, COOL IDEAS, but yeah it was WAYY short, although understandably if you made it longer i'm guessing it wouldn't have made the fest.

It was off to a great start, i'd seriously consider going back to this and maybe making it longer and re-release at a later date, i'm INTRIGUED

Pizza The Hut · 09-17-2008, 04:38 PM

Thanks for the comments, all.

Yeah I agree about it being so short. Dan, you were right, I just started it too late in comparison to the fest that I couldn't get much more. But I didn't plan on this being an end, but only a beginning (cue matrix music).

I do plan on making more installments to this idea. It will be a series of sorts, but not exactly contiguous or linear. But they will connect, in the end. In fact, this loosely connects with something I've already released on these boards. But that will only be more apparent if I keep this "world" going.

Ned · 09-17-2008, 08:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aaron Haynes

Felt like an interesting start that doesn't go anywhere.

Tony Chop · 09-18-2008, 01:54 PM

It's interesting. Really

Evil Ash · 09-19-2008, 10:04 PM

I would have liked to seen this prolonged. Like the bizarre inner workings on the Idea Machine, and the movie it makes, kinda thing.

Neat concept, but felt unfinished and rough.

Shwill · 09-21-2008, 04:08 AM

I recieved the impression that you were showing a concept of how actors were picked. I thought it was neat, though, like everyone else here, a little short. It was good though. I think I may find an interest in the future movies to be produced.

Tuna Hematoma · 09-21-2008, 06:41 AM

Had that good "wtf" feel, but the end kinda ruined the wtf and just made me think of lazy. I thought this was going to be a Boohbah commercial or something.

Trooper · 09-21-2008, 02:13 PM

I see what was trying to be done, but I thought it needed a touch more to it. I'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10

Fredrick · 09-21-2008, 02:24 PM

Review'd.

Bobby Swisha · 09-23-2008, 12:12 AM

This sucks.

David Crowe · 09-23-2008, 11:46 AM

It had a nice atmosphere, but like everyone else said, it was too abstract to make any sense to me. If by 'a series of sorts' you mean a bunch of different clips like this that on their own make no sense but do when linked together, then that will be really interesting if you pull it off right.

Pizza The Hut · 09-23-2008, 03:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by David Crowe

If by 'a series of sorts' you mean a bunch of different clips like this that on their own make no sense but do when linked together, then that will be really interesting if you pull it off right.

Yeah, that's somewhat like I was thinking.

Breed · 09-24-2008, 09:22 AM

Bizarre, but cool. I'd say its worth a watch. I think I get what it means ;p

09-17-2008, 01:49 AM	#4
Stan Pennant Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 761	One thing it definitely has going for it is that it's so short, that you feel compelled to watch it again, just for the ride.
Stan Pennant Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 761

09-17-2008, 01:51 AM	#5
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Sorry, but I didn't like this. There were a couple of interesting shots, but otherwise it was pretty lame. It doesn't work well as serious or as a spoof (I can't really tell).
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

09-17-2008, 01:54 AM	#6
Stan Pennant Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 761	If it wasn’t for the cartoony nature of 3DMM and Gustave’s permanent smile, it would be allot easier to know whether or not to take it seriously.
Stan Pennant Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 761

09-17-2008, 02:07 AM	#7
Slade Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 9,390	Too abstract for me to be intrigued, really.
Slade Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 9,390

09-17-2008, 03:01 AM	#9
Eric Burger Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 665	Alright, but not too interesting. Also very short. Probably won't watch it twice.
Eric Burger Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 665

09-17-2008, 01:37 AM	#2
Rabid Dinosaur Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 14,894	It is an interesting idea, if not entirely apparent from watching the movie.

09-17-2008, 01:40 AM	#3
Space Goat Administrator Join Date: Sep 2001 Posts: 6,042	It's incredibly difficult to pull off abstract movies in 3D Movie Maker, as it is so unnatural, but this is definitely a good one.

09-17-2008, 02:17 AM	#8
Jesterfoot Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,470	Interesting. I don't really get it though. This should have elaborated more into into whatever idea it was trying to communicate. Way too short. 3/10 Though I'm still curious

09-17-2008, 07:04 AM	#10
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	It was ok.
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

09-17-2008, 07:16 AM	#11
Based Scrooge Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 1,060	.
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09-17-2008, 07:47 AM	#12
Aaron Haynes Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 15,125	Felt like an interesting start that doesn't go anywhere. I'm not opposed to abstract movies by any means, but give me enough to work with, you know? Hold my attention and show me something that's not just compelling, but resolves itself. This felt like you stopped because you ran out of time, not like you chose to end it where you did. Consider expanding on it, wondering what it's about and where it would "logically" go in your mind.

09-17-2008, 10:23 AM	#13
Dominator Dan Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 11,564	Yeah agreed with the last 2 posts, COOL IDEAS, but yeah it was WAYY short, although understandably if you made it longer i'm guessing it wouldn't have made the fest. It was off to a great start, i'd seriously consider going back to this and maybe making it longer and re-release at a later date, i'm INTRIGUED

09-17-2008, 04:38 PM	#14
Pizza The Hut Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 10,633	Thanks for the comments, all. Yeah I agree about it being so short. Dan, you were right, I just started it too late in comparison to the fest that I couldn't get much more. But I didn't plan on this being an end, but only a beginning (cue matrix music). I do plan on making more installments to this idea. It will be a series of sorts, but not exactly contiguous or linear. But they will connect, in the end. In fact, this loosely connects with something I've already released on these boards. But that will only be more apparent if I keep this "world" going.

09-18-2008, 01:54 PM	#16
Tony Chop Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 248	It's interesting. Really
Tony Chop Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 248

09-19-2008, 10:04 PM	#17
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534	I would have liked to seen this prolonged. Like the bizarre inner workings on the Idea Machine, and the movie it makes, kinda thing. Neat concept, but felt unfinished and rough.
Evil Ash Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 15,534

09-21-2008, 04:08 AM	#18
Shwill Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 245	I recieved the impression that you were showing a concept of how actors were picked. I thought it was neat, though, like everyone else here, a little short. It was good though. I think I may find an interest in the future movies to be produced.
Shwill Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 245

09-21-2008, 06:41 AM	#19
Tuna Hematoma Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 10,055	Had that good "wtf" feel, but the end kinda ruined the wtf and just made me think of lazy. I thought this was going to be a Boohbah commercial or something.

09-21-2008, 02:13 PM	#20
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441	I see what was trying to be done, but I thought it needed a touch more to it. I'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10
Trooper Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,441

09-21-2008, 02:24 PM	#21
Fredrick Moderator Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 5,113	Review'd.
Fredrick Moderator Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 5,113

09-23-2008, 12:12 AM	#22
Bobby Swisha Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2002 Posts: 46,012	This sucks.

09-23-2008, 11:46 AM	#23
David Crowe Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,736	It had a nice atmosphere, but like everyone else said, it was too abstract to make any sense to me. If by 'a series of sorts' you mean a bunch of different clips like this that on their own make no sense but do when linked together, then that will be really interesting if you pull it off right.

09-24-2008, 09:22 AM	#25
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768	Bizarre, but cool. I'd say its worth a watch. I think I get what it means ;p
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768