Untitled (First Scene)

Untitled (First Scene) · 05:30 PM

First scene, or at least the first scene with the two main characters in - this is literally a solitary "scene" as in I've used a default scene with different camera angles. You can surmise from this that I haven't bothered myself wholly on presentation; it's about the dialogue.

... pretty much me and my brother messing about with a microphone, then "put to" rather than "applied across" a 3Dmm environment. ANYWAY, enough waffling, it makes me laugh ... what do you think?

PS: One of the characters is from NE England (adds to the comedy value), so his lines might be a little impenetrable to people outside the UK... and probably people inside it as well. But i'm sure you'll get a laugh anyway, and I might add subtitles later, even though he is technically speaking english.

Compcat · 11-29-2006, 02:15 PM

Try the uploader at the top of this website. It's there in the upper right, next to 'links' and 'stats.'

Kezza · 05:31 PM

Yes, cheers; I'm aware of it - I'm just on a public-access computer at the moment that blocks it, which is why I'm hosting like a retard not a normal human being.

Will upload proper when I get home.

edit: the link seems to be working now?...
edit(2): no joy with that psycho thingy, I'm pretty sure atleast one link should work for everybody... so WATCH

Cowtacular Spleen · 11-29-2006, 06:31 PM

no sir. I don't like it. Sorry, 'twas uninteresting. I did like the voices though. Something about a cockney accent always gets me.

Kezza · 11-30-2006, 10:27 AM

HAHAHARGH! Thanks for the feedback, but that wasn't a cockney accent (LOL)

'Twas infact the opposite of cockney, but I can't expect an american to understand the subtleties of english dialect.

... but that was funny, COCKNEY! heehee

edit: Oh yes, and how do I make it intersting then?

James McCloud · 11-30-2006, 09:12 PM

Haha, if he could answer that, I think there'd be a few more movies in the database.

Pirate Balloon · 11-30-2006, 09:38 PM

Hahah, thats not cockney, that's GEORDIE.

Kezza · 12-01-2006, 11:28 AM

Damn straight it's geordie; I was born and bred in (all most) sight of the Tyne.

I think I'm going to rework the scene within a custom setting - but the voices and dialogue is good right???

And I've got a beast of a story lined up... I just posted this to get some reaction to my two main characters

Kezza · 12-01-2006, 12:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cowtacular Spleen

no sir. I don't like it. Sorry, 'twas uninteresting.

I'm now unsurprised you didn't like it, because I've just skimmed over your repertoire of films... seems to be a defecating theme... bit different to my sense of humour, but probably no more immature

Denny Betterman · 12-01-2006, 07:10 PM

Watch his 00DeeBoned series. You'll have more respect for what he considers interesting when they're done. I'm no superfan of the Hobo Talk series, and I'm not going to watch those Dennis movies (though I don't even think he made them), but DeeBoned is what it's all about right there.

Also, I'm not going to watch a movie that's just the first scene, especially if it's default actors in default scenes. WIPs aren't really what the movie database is for, anyway. Maybe later when you post some updates.

Lars · 12-16-2006, 06:11 PM

What a stroke of comic genius, this is the sort of thing this foyer has been waiting for -thankyou for producing a 3dm of quality!

Lars · 12-16-2006, 06:11 PM

I am aware I wrote foyer instead of forum.

Lars · 12-16-2006, 06:12 PM

Also Denny Wetterman wtf? Who writes so much bilge for a fil they haven't watched?

Red Scorpion · 12-16-2006, 06:14 PM

Shut up imp.

Lars · 12-20-2006, 06:16 PM

very good you do know what your name is er red scorpion, nice cartoons.

11-29-2006, 02:15 PM	#2
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	Try the uploader at the top of this website. It's there in the upper right, next to 'links' and 'stats.'
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11-29-2006, 02:50 PM	#3
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10	Yes, cheers; I'm aware of it - I'm just on a public-access computer at the moment that blocks it, which is why I'm hosting like a retard not a normal human being. Will upload proper when I get home. edit: the link seems to be working now?... edit(2): no joy with that psycho thingy, I'm pretty sure atleast one link should work for everybody... so WATCH
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10	Last edited by Kezza : 11-29-2006 at 05:31 PM.

11-30-2006, 10:27 AM	#5
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10	HAHAHARGH! Thanks for the feedback, but that wasn't a cockney accent (LOL) 'Twas infact the opposite of cockney, but I can't expect an american to understand the subtleties of english dialect. ... but that was funny, COCKNEY! heehee edit: Oh yes, and how do I make it intersting then?
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10

12-01-2006, 11:28 AM	#8
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10	Damn straight it's geordie; I was born and bred in (all most) sight of the Tyne. I think I'm going to rework the scene within a custom setting - but the voices and dialogue is good right??? And I've got a beast of a story lined up... I just posted this to get some reaction to my two main characters
Kezza Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 10

12-16-2006, 06:11 PM	#11
Lars Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 12	What a stroke of comic genius, this is the sort of thing this foyer has been waiting for -thankyou for producing a 3dm of quality!
Lars Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 12

11-29-2006, 06:31 PM	#4
Cowtacular Spleen Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 2,217	no sir. I don't like it. Sorry, 'twas uninteresting. I did like the voices though. Something about a cockney accent always gets me.

11-30-2006, 09:12 PM	#6
James McCloud Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,214	Haha, if he could answer that, I think there'd be a few more movies in the database.

11-30-2006, 09:38 PM	#7
Pirate Balloon Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,911	Hahah, thats not cockney, that's GEORDIE.

12-01-2006, 07:10 PM	#10
Denny Betterman Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,531	Watch his 00DeeBoned series. You'll have more respect for what he considers interesting when they're done. I'm no superfan of the Hobo Talk series, and I'm not going to watch those Dennis movies (though I don't even think he made them), but DeeBoned is what it's all about right there. Also, I'm not going to watch a movie that's just the first scene, especially if it's default actors in default scenes. WIPs aren't really what the movie database is for, anyway. Maybe later when you post some updates.

12-16-2006, 06:12 PM	#13
Lars Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 12	Also Denny Wetterman wtf? Who writes so much bilge for a fil they haven't watched?
Lars Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 12

12-16-2006, 06:14 PM	#14
Red Scorpion Banned Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 4,229	Shut up imp.
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12-20-2006, 06:16 PM	#15
Lars Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 12	very good you do know what your name is er red scorpion, nice cartoons.
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