The Adventures of Bill & Will - The Hospital of Horror

The Adventures of Bill & Will - The Hospital of Horror · 07:18 PM

This is my first Real movie release. If you rate, please watch it first.
Screenshots added!
The voices are terrible, that's the reason for the subtitles.

Richard Bevis · 07-30-2006, 06:41 PM

Your plot summary isn't great. Why not have something more intriguing, like:

"In a plan gone horribly wrong, a pair of escapee prison captives must fight their way out of a terrifying hospital enhabited by monsters..."

VitoXman · 07-30-2006, 06:42 PM

Maybe, but this is not a Drama, it's a Comedy.

Space Goat · 07-30-2006, 07:26 PM

It's pretty impressive for your first real release, so in that respect, good job.

However, to be critical of the movie itself, it seemed like the story was just kinda made up as you went along, and to be honest, it wasn't funny. Although, that being said, you did have a nice ironic twist at the ending that closed the movie nicely, so kudos to you there.

Overall, a good effort. Good luck with your future releases.

VitoXman · 07-30-2006, 08:12 PM

Thanks Space Goat

Jimmy DeMarco · 07-31-2006, 01:39 AM

Yeah it was pretty good for a first movie, but you really need to work on scene building and animation

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Stroggdor · 07-31-2006, 05:52 PM

this looks pretty good. I will watch it before I rate it.

Stroggdor · 07-31-2006, 06:12 PM

Pretty nice

Compcat · 07-31-2006, 08:19 PM

I actually liked this a whole lot more than I thought I would. My favorite line is the "Secret Time!" at the end, I don't know why I found that so funny. The accent really adds a weird but good flavor to the movie.

Brossy · 08-01-2006, 01:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Barton Almighty

this looks pretty good. I will watch it before I rate it.

As opposed to what?!?!? Why would you rate a movie without watching it?!?!?!

Pirate Balloon · 08-01-2006, 01:27 AM

Yeah!? Who the hell doesn't?

Sam Hughes · 08-01-2006, 11:20 AM

I like this

Stroggdor · 08-01-2006, 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brossy

As opposed to what?!?!? Why would you rate a movie without watching it?!?!?!

I only did that once for The groening- mcfarlan wars 'cause it was huge like a kajillion MB

Jonny Anson · 08-02-2006, 01:42 AM

Nice little movie here, gave me some good laughs now and again.

Kevitus · 08-03-2006, 03:25 PM

Dude, you should work on your opening sequence! Otherwise: OK.

VitoXman · 08-03-2006, 08:24 PM

Thanks to everbody who have watched my movie, I'm going to take all the recommendations to make a good and better sequel.

Funny Bones · 10-07-2016, 09:38 PM

https://f001.backblaze.com/file/3dmmtv/d3Nz.mp4

07-30-2006, 06:42 PM	#3
VitoXman Junior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 134	Maybe, but this is not a Drama, it's a Comedy.
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07-30-2006, 08:12 PM	#5
VitoXman Junior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 134	Thanks Space Goat
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07-31-2006, 01:39 AM	#6
Jimmy DeMarco Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 619	Yeah it was pretty good for a first movie, but you really need to work on scene building and animation .
Jimmy DeMarco Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 619

07-31-2006, 05:52 PM	#7
Stroggdor Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 367	this looks pretty good. I will watch it before I rate it.
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07-31-2006, 06:12 PM	#8
Stroggdor Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 367	Pretty nice
Stroggdor Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 367

07-30-2006, 06:41 PM	#2
Richard Bevis Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 2,190	Your plot summary isn't great. Why not have something more intriguing, like: "In a plan gone horribly wrong, a pair of escapee prison captives must fight their way out of a terrifying hospital enhabited by monsters..."

07-30-2006, 07:26 PM	#4
Space Goat Administrator Join Date: Sep 2001 Posts: 6,042	It's pretty impressive for your first real release, so in that respect, good job. However, to be critical of the movie itself, it seemed like the story was just kinda made up as you went along, and to be honest, it wasn't funny. Although, that being said, you did have a nice ironic twist at the ending that closed the movie nicely, so kudos to you there. Overall, a good effort. Good luck with your future releases.

07-31-2006, 08:19 PM	#9
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810	I actually liked this a whole lot more than I thought I would. My favorite line is the "Secret Time!" at the end, I don't know why I found that so funny. The accent really adds a weird but good flavor to the movie.
Compcat Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 8,810

08-01-2006, 01:27 AM	#11
Pirate Balloon Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,911	Yeah!? Who the hell doesn't?

08-01-2006, 11:20 AM	#12
Sam Hughes Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 1,408	I like this

08-02-2006, 01:42 AM	#14
Jonny Anson Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 1,146	Nice little movie here, gave me some good laughs now and again.

08-03-2006, 03:25 PM	#15
Kevitus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4,542	Dude, you should work on your opening sequence! Otherwise: OK.
Kevitus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 4,542

08-03-2006, 08:24 PM	#16
VitoXman Junior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 134	Thanks to everbody who have watched my movie, I'm going to take all the recommendations to make a good and better sequel.
VitoXman Junior Member Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 134

10-07-2016, 09:38 PM	#17
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585	https://f001.backblaze.com/file/3dmmtv/d3Nz.mp4