Guilt

Guilt · 06-29-2006, 04:36 AM

I just wanted to make a movie that means somthing. I think that you all will like it, but I hope I'm not wrong. Thanks to all of you who watch it, and thanks to Pirate Ballon for helping me do everything and for Rocking...

Shawn McGravy · 06-29-2006, 04:53 AM

Hmmph.. This is fairly impressive. I must say I'm very surprised. You've proven to very adequately handle using consistent grammar and more importantly don't type like a fucking ape. A tiny spelling mistake here or there but it definitely looks like you put some thought into what you say so of course it's forgivable. A little heavy on the ellipses but hey it wasn't overbearing. No problems there.

You even put some good time and effort in making a fairly decent screenshot. And the title isn't Barney goes Golfing! For a newbie you show great signs of ability and a very very tolerable level of intelligence! Finally a newbie who doesn't seem like a complete and total fucking moron.

I see great things from you sir, and am thoroughly anxious for future posts.

8.5/10

Xiro · 06-30-2006, 01:39 AM

Bet it was inspired by "Bang Bang you're dead"

Nice work there

Madrond · 06-30-2006, 08:01 PM

Yeah Kind of. Did you ever see the Bang Bang you're dead movie with Ben Foster?

Pirate Balloon · 06-30-2006, 08:08 PM

Your techniques are pretty out-dated, you watch any new movies? Like, L for a gun and using spheres as muzzle flair=naw. The main thing that got me was the sound design. The song volume levels were all over the place, most being too loud.

Mabdog · 06-30-2006, 08:33 PM

looks pretty good

Xiro · 07-03-2006, 05:50 PM

yeah it's very good

Madrond · 07-07-2006, 02:23 AM

Yeah Sorry about the sound

I think my next movie will be better sound.
Thanks guys.

glad you liked it

Funny Bones · 02-22-2017, 09:05 PM

06-30-2006, 01:39 AM	#3
Xiro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 162	Bet it was inspired by "Bang Bang you're dead" Nice work there
Xiro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 162

06-30-2006, 08:01 PM	#4
Madrond Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32	Yeah Kind of. Did you ever see the Bang Bang you're dead movie with Ben Foster?
Madrond Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32

06-30-2006, 08:33 PM	#6
Mabdog Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 5,690	looks pretty good
Mabdog Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 5,690

07-03-2006, 05:50 PM	#7
Xiro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 162	yeah it's very good
Xiro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 162

07-07-2006, 02:23 AM	#8
Madrond Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32	Yeah Sorry about the sound I think my next movie will be better sound. Thanks guys. glad you liked it
Madrond Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32

06-29-2006, 04:53 AM	#2
Shawn McGravy Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 3,785	Hmmph.. This is fairly impressive. I must say I'm very surprised. You've proven to very adequately handle using consistent grammar and more importantly don't type like a fucking ape. A tiny spelling mistake here or there but it definitely looks like you put some thought into what you say so of course it's forgivable. A little heavy on the ellipses but hey it wasn't overbearing. No problems there. You even put some good time and effort in making a fairly decent screenshot. And the title isn't Barney goes Golfing! For a newbie you show great signs of ability and a very very tolerable level of intelligence! Finally a newbie who doesn't seem like a complete and total fucking moron. I see great things from you sir, and am thoroughly anxious for future posts. 8.5/10

06-30-2006, 08:08 PM	#5
Pirate Balloon Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 7,905	Your techniques are pretty out-dated, you watch any new movies? Like, L for a gun and using spheres as muzzle flair=naw. The main thing that got me was the sound design. The song volume levels were all over the place, most being too loud.

02-22-2017, 09:05 PM	#9
Funny Bones Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,585

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