"The Piano" - My debut movie - Hype thread

Alex Bernal · 08:45 PM

Yeah, I've been working on it for like 4 months and I remade it 3 times because of today's standards, this is the third and last one.

THE PIANO

Plot: Patricio is a 37 year old man, who suddenly gets involved in a terrible accident that marked the rest of his life, now the only thing left to do for him is follow the steps of his pianist father, who got killed when he was only a teenager with his twin brothers. Now he will revolutionize the music industry of his city, playing the awesome songs of his father in a unique way.

Director: Alex Bernal.
Writer: Alex Bernal.
Voice actors: Ryugacooking and Wolfe.
Assistant Director: Kevituz.
Music Composer: Samuel Deacon.

I'll later post some screenshots in order for you to rate my scenery.
Anyone willing to be an assistant director? EDIT: Now I have one

Demented Ferret · 04-10-2006, 09:07 PM

This looks like something to look forward to, nice to see someone who isn't going for an action-packed plot

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Richard Bevis · 04-10-2006, 09:31 PM

Sure looks interesting.

Gorosaurus · 04-11-2006, 03:12 AM

Awesome!

Are any of the songs original?

Alex Bernal · 04-11-2006, 03:23 AM

From the game: Legend of Manna.
Thanks to Ryugacooking

Breed · 04-11-2006, 03:32 AM

This looks promising! Good luck with it sir, can't wait to see the results.

Warren Wagner · 04-11-2006, 04:00 AM

I look forward to this, as Ferret said, I am glad someone has come into the community and wants to make films with a real plot. I download this when it comes out!

Alex Bernal · 04-11-2006, 04:00 AM

Yeah guys thanks!
I won't dissapoint you.

Ben Rice · 04-11-2006, 08:09 PM

Looks good. But the poster makes it look like it's a ghost story or something.

Tony Clay · 04-11-2006, 10:48 PM

I read the script, and this guy can't write worth shit.

Pizza The Hut · 04-11-2006, 10:49 PM

Haha, you used my friend's piano texture. Good choice; he's good at computer graphics.

Alex Bernal · 04-11-2006, 11:03 PM

I made a mod reuqest thread, asking a Piano, and Div made one for me.

Alex Bernal · 04-11-2006, 11:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Clay

I read the script, and this guy can't write worth shit.

You probably didn't understand it because of my gramatic and instead of helping you where being a dick, anyway that was fixed.

Gorosaurus · 04-12-2006, 03:12 AM

Andres · 04-12-2006, 03:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Clay

I read the script, and this guy can't write worth shit.

OWNED.

Breed · 04-12-2006, 05:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alex Bernal

You probably didn't understand it because of my gramatic and instead of helping you where being a dick, anyway that was fixed.

I am a writer too--if you'd like I'll take a looksee and give my opinion (I won't be an ass hole)

Alex Bernal · 04-12-2006, 06:07 AM

Thanks, I'd love that.

Breed · 04-12-2006, 09:31 AM

IM me on AIM: DYLPYKL47, or upload it somewhere and link me via PM.

Getysburg · 04-12-2006, 10:08 AM

Looks good. The synopsis is too revealing though.

Tony Clay · 04-12-2006, 06:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alex Bernal

You probably didn't understand it because of my gramatic and instead of helping you where being a dick, anyway that was fixed.

I PMed you about your "gramatic" and told you how impossible it was to read the thing, and you never replied about it. Instead, you told me to improvise.

Look, it only takes a miniscule amount of effort to make something readable. I became a "dick" after you kept ignoring me and just demanded I do my lines.

Re: what happened with the script?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Alex Bernal
You didn't reply me.
The other guy made the main voice, can you record the voice for Adrianno?
please.

hey dude, just out of curiousity, how old are you? Because no offense, but this script was terrible, and I doubt anyone over 12 could write so badly.

If you REALLY want to get this stuff made, please for the love of god edit it or do whatever to make it acceptable because as it stands I could not imagine myself recording any lines for this.

Dude I am not trying to be a dick, I just want to explain why I have been reluctant to do these lines.

If you find it too difficult to make appropriate changes to your story please let me know and I will try to improve it.

Correct me if I am wrong, but I think I was being anything but a dick, I actually OFFERED to work on it myself. And after that, you never replied.

Sure, I could have minced words, but I'm a blunt guy, sorry, please deal with it.

Alex Bernal · 04-12-2006, 07:09 PM

I did reply you, sending you the file where the main voice actor improved the voices of the main character, in order for you to make something similar, after that you told me to get someone else because my script sucks. I wasn't trying to ignore you, I really needed help but probably you didn't have enough patience.

Just forget all about this, I now have the voices you where going to record and sorry if I just ignored you.

Tony Clay · 04-12-2006, 07:26 PM

no don't worry about it

Jim Raynor · 04-12-2006, 07:47 PM

What expansions are you using?

Alex Bernal · 04-12-2006, 08:13 PM

Frankie's 3dmm Expansion Pack 1 and v3dmm

Wolfe · 04-15-2006, 03:33 AM

I'd like to re-do my part if that's okay.

I don't feel I was satisfactory.

If possible, may I redo the parts of my character.

04-10-2006, 08:45 PM	#1
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	"The Piano" - My debut movie - Hype thread Yeah, I've been working on it for like 4 months and I remade it 3 times because of today's standards, this is the third and last one. THE PIANO Plot: Patricio is a 37 year old man, who suddenly gets involved in a terrible accident that marked the rest of his life, now the only thing left to do for him is follow the steps of his pianist father, who got killed when he was only a teenager with his twin brothers. Now he will revolutionize the music industry of his city, playing the awesome songs of his father in a unique way. Director: Alex Bernal. Writer: Alex Bernal. Voice actors: Ryugacooking and Wolfe. Assistant Director: Kevituz. Music Composer: Samuel Deacon. I'll later post some screenshots in order for you to rate my scenery. Anyone willing to be an assistant director? EDIT: Now I have one
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	Last edited by Alex Bernal : 04-21-2006 at 08:45 PM.

04-11-2006, 03:23 AM	#5
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	From the game: Legend of Manna. Thanks to Ryugacooking
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-11-2006, 03:32 AM	#6
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768	This looks promising! Good luck with it sir, can't wait to see the results.
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768

04-11-2006, 04:00 AM	#8
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	Yeah guys thanks! I won't dissapoint you.
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-11-2006, 08:09 PM	#9
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220	Looks good. But the poster makes it look like it's a ghost story or something.
Ben Rice Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 10,220

04-10-2006, 09:07 PM	#2
Demented Ferret Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 16,248	This looks like something to look forward to, nice to see someone who isn't going for an action-packed plot .

04-10-2006, 09:31 PM	#3
Richard Bevis Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 2,190	Sure looks interesting.

04-11-2006, 03:12 AM	#4
Gorosaurus Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 16,146	Awesome! Are any of the songs original?

04-11-2006, 04:00 AM	#7
Warren Wagner Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 1,747	I look forward to this, as Ferret said, I am glad someone has come into the community and wants to make films with a real plot. I download this when it comes out!

04-11-2006, 10:48 PM	#10
Tony Clay Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 2,583	I read the script, and this guy can't write worth shit.
Tony Clay Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 2,583

04-11-2006, 10:49 PM	#11
Pizza The Hut Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 10,633	Haha, you used my friend's piano texture. Good choice; he's good at computer graphics.

04-11-2006, 11:03 PM	#12
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	I made a mod reuqest thread, asking a Piano, and Div made one for me.
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-12-2006, 03:12 AM	#14
Gorosaurus Super Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 16,146

04-12-2006, 06:07 AM	#17
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	Thanks, I'd love that.
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-12-2006, 09:31 AM	#18
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768	IM me on AIM: DYLPYKL47, or upload it somewhere and link me via PM.
Breed Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Posts: 7,768

04-12-2006, 10:08 AM	#19
Getysburg Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 2,510	Looks good. The synopsis is too revealing though.
Getysburg Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 2,510

04-12-2006, 07:09 PM	#21
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	I did reply you, sending you the file where the main voice actor improved the voices of the main character, in order for you to make something similar, after that you told me to get someone else because my script sucks. I wasn't trying to ignore you, I really needed help but probably you didn't have enough patience. Just forget all about this, I now have the voices you where going to record and sorry if I just ignored you.
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-12-2006, 07:26 PM	#22
Tony Clay Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 2,583	no don't worry about it
Tony Clay Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 2,583

04-12-2006, 07:47 PM	#23
Jim Raynor Banned Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,400	What expansions are you using?
Jim Raynor Banned Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,400

04-12-2006, 08:13 PM	#24
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261	Frankie's 3dmm Expansion Pack 1 and v3dmm
Alex Bernal Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 261

04-15-2006, 03:33 AM	#25
Wolfe Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 67	I'd like to re-do my part if that's okay. I don't feel I was satisfactory. If possible, may I redo the parts of my character.
Wolfe Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 67