DAWN.

There was only one unfinished scene in here, but that was just because it was hastily made. Anyways, happy new years everyone!




EDIT: I got the first movie post of the year!

[Cabineet The Keet]

Nice job! I thought it was a little pretentious with that whole monologue though. Other than that this is probably your most consistently well put together movie.

[Lt Films]

Originally Posted by Cabineet The Keet

Nice job! I thought it was a little pretentious with that whole monologue though. Other than that this is probably your most consistently well put together movie.

Thank you. It was only done since I wanted the character to have a pessimistic viewpoint lmao.

[Stroganoff]

That's actually really interesting! I wish you could've conveyed that somehow in the movie. I really like the visual style and the idea of this - sort of a look at how the character views the world, and how jaded he is.

My only two real critiques is that the animation is choppy with some odd camera angles, and that it's a bit short. Other than that though, this is really promising and you're slowly but steadily improving. Keep up!

also, Max Payne, great choice btw

[Lt Films]

Originally Posted by Stroganoff

That's actually really interesting! I wish you could've conveyed that somehow in the movie. I really like the visual style and the idea of this - sort of a look at how the character views the world, and how jaded he is.

My only two real critiques is that the animation is choppy with some odd camera angles, and that it's a bit short. Other than that though, this is really promising and you're slowly but steadily improving. Keep up!

also, Max Payne, great choice btw

Thanks dude.

[TheToyStoryGuy]

this is a pretty cool movie!, the animation is not bad, the scenario could use more buildings and life too.