Cinderella

Cinderella · 11:36 PM

Hope you enjoy this, its from before i found this site! Let me know what you guys think! BTW: It's voiceless except for the evil laugh, that's from me! Enjoy!

Tony Maroj · 10-01-2016, 05:04 PM

btw: i happen to like remaking fairy-tales, so if anyone wants me to do one for them, just name your faves! it really does help me with making more popular movie types.

Phil Williamson · 10-02-2016, 11:33 PM

your use of music and sound effects was pretty good given that you worked entirely with the default stuff. but I found the long stretches of "silent dialogue" impossible to sit through. voices help a lot, but even if that's not an option for whatever reason you should at least use text boxes or silent movie style dialogue cards or something so we can tell what's being said

Tony Maroj · 10-03-2016, 03:53 PM

I left it up to the imagination since its a well known story as it is.

10-01-2016, 05:04 PM	#2
Tony Maroj Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 225	btw: i happen to like remaking fairy-tales, so if anyone wants me to do one for them, just name your faves! it really does help me with making more popular movie types.
Tony Maroj Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 225

10-03-2016, 03:53 PM	#4
Tony Maroj Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 225	I left it up to the imagination since its a well known story as it is.
Tony Maroj Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 225

10-02-2016, 11:33 PM	#3
Phil Williamson Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 16,911	your use of music and sound effects was pretty good given that you worked entirely with the default stuff. but I found the long stretches of "silent dialogue" impossible to sit through. voices help a lot, but even if that's not an option for whatever reason you should at least use text boxes or silent movie style dialogue cards or something so we can tell what's being said