My new short film

Bravoie · 12-24-2012, 12:49 AM

I already posted the "Bad Robots" trailer here before but I finally got around to finishing the entire film last night. It's about a robot invasion and sort of fits into the 2012 apocalyptic theme. So yeah, tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is encouraged!

Jesterfoot · 12-24-2012, 02:24 AM

lol, not bad at all. i didn't know you were a film maker.

The first woods sequence was way too dark. And there should have been more graphic violence, and action/suspense scenes. Extremely corny script, but it works, and I laughed a number of times.

nice!

Jt Copper · 12-24-2012, 09:11 AM

Anyone who uses 3dmm wants to be a film maker dude.

Omnirom · 12-24-2012, 12:48 PM

Really shitty. Some of the ugliest hicks for actors I've ever seen. Is that white girl a dude wearing a wig? An Ebay joke, really? Not funny, not suspenseful, not creative at all. Is this for film school? This is such a fucking pile of shit.

Scarecrow · 03:59 AM

I dig it. That was a fun watch. I'd say its weak point was the acting, although I understand having limited choices on the low budget end.

Bravoie · 12-25-2012, 05:27 PM

Thanks for watching guys.

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Originally Posted by Jesterfoot

The first woods sequence was way too dark.

Haha a friend of mine warned me about this while I was still editing. I did "day for night" shooting and had a really tough time getting the right balance to where it wasn't too bright or dark. Next time, I think I'll actually shoot at night.

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Originally Posted by Omnirom

Is that white girl a dude wearing a wig?

She's actually a girl I casted off of craigslist and she had darker hair in her pics so I was kind of surprised when she showed up for the shoot like that. That reflective white-blonde color didn't cooperate with the green screen and made my editing work a living hell. It was my fault for not inquiring about it first though.

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Originally Posted by Scarecrow

I'd say its weak point was the acting, although I understand having limited choices on the low budget end.

Agreed, I'm def gonna focus more on acting and storytelling for my next project and use little to no cgi.

12-24-2012, 12:49 AM	#1
Bravoie Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,713	My new short film I already posted the "Bad Robots" trailer here before but I finally got around to finishing the entire film last night. It's about a robot invasion and sort of fits into the 2012 apocalyptic theme. So yeah, tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is encouraged!
Bravoie Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 4,713

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Jt Copper Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,463	Anyone who uses 3dmm wants to be a film maker dude.
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12-24-2012, 12:48 PM	#4
Omnirom Banned Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 569	Really shitty. Some of the ugliest hicks for actors I've ever seen. Is that white girl a dude wearing a wig? An Ebay joke, really? Not funny, not suspenseful, not creative at all. Is this for film school? This is such a fucking pile of shit.
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12-24-2012, 02:01 PM	#5
Scarecrow Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 4,217	I dig it. That was a fun watch. I'd say its weak point was the acting, although I understand having limited choices on the low budget end.
Scarecrow Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 4,217	Last edited by Scarecrow : 12-25-2012 at 03:59 AM.

12-24-2012, 02:24 AM	#2
Jesterfoot Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 7,470	lol, not bad at all. i didn't know you were a film maker. The first woods sequence was way too dark. And there should have been more graphic violence, and action/suspense scenes. Extremely corny script, but it works, and I laughed a number of times. nice!