A Little Help (Youtube, Subtitles)
 

positive criticism please

any comments?

I liked the sniper view.

I didn't really like the voice acting, but otherwise it was O.K

It made me smile.

Which... might not be the intended reaction, but yes.

Awesome i liked the sniper view best!

funny and great sniper view

Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go:

1: Needs better voice acting
2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes
3: If you add subtitles it's a good idea to spell check them and make sure they match the dialogue
4: The president is black
5: If you snipe someone near a car the car doesn't fall over

it was k

[quote=Lord Blazer]Positive criticism is not really a thing but here you go:


2: Don't use default 3dmm scenes


it really doesn't matter if you use the default scenes.

Speaking as someone who was making 3dmm movies 10 years ago, it really does.

If he was sleeping in the desert at night he would have froze to death. This movie is completely unbelievable.

its an animation.

he is shivering? He doesn't seem cold, Bill....

Hahah when the president falls over and knocks over the car I fucking pissed myself.

Good show.

Just watched this. I'm actually pretty impressed, it's definitely an improvement over some of your other movies, especially considering the fact that there's actually a story. As ash said, the president falling over and knocking over the car was pretty funny. I also really liked how cool his old alleyway looked after he got his money.

I'd suggest trying to stop using default scenery altogether, that's the major boundary here keeping your movies in "noob" territory. Work on building scenery by hand with various methods. Try deconstructing different scenes in some of our movies to see how it's done (especially in v3dmm where it's more complicated and possibly a little intimidating) Otherwise, I think most of the other improvements will come naturally. Keep it up.

thanks man! these kind off comments give me some help to keep on making films, much appreciated!

you know i was kidding, right Bill...? :)

haha okay

yeah I liked it. Keep it up.