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I just wanted to make a movie that means somthing. I think that you all will like it, but I hope I'm not wrong. Thanks to all of you who watch it, and thanks to Pirate Ballon for helping me do everything and for Rocking...

Hmmph.. This is fairly impressive. I must say I'm very surprised. You've proven to very adequately handle using consistent grammar and more importantly don't type like a fucking ape. A tiny spelling mistake here or there but it definitely looks like you put some thought into what you say so of course it's forgivable. A little heavy on the ellipses but hey it wasn't overbearing. No problems there.

You even put some good time and effort in making a fairly decent screenshot. And the title isn't Barney goes Golfing! For a newbie you show great signs of ability and a very very tolerable level of intelligence! Finally a newbie who doesn't seem like a complete and total fucking moron.

I see great things from you sir, and am thoroughly anxious for future posts.

8.5/10

Bet it was inspired by "Bang Bang you're dead"

Nice work there

Yeah Kind of. Did you ever see the Bang Bang you're dead movie with Ben Foster?

Your techniques are pretty out-dated, you watch any new movies? Like, L for a gun and using spheres as muzzle flair=naw. The main thing that got me was the sound design. The song volume levels were all over the place, most being too loud.

looks pretty good

yeah it's very good

Yeah Sorry about the sound :( I think my next movie will be better sound.
Thanks guys. :anime glad you liked it